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Good articleNavy SEALs (video game) has been listed as one of the Video games good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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January 19, 2016Good article nomineeListed

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 15:54, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Will review later on or tomorrow.♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:55, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Perhaps change " in 1991" to "the following year" to avoid repetition in lede?
  • "Mancunian " is probably not ideal for a global audience, English should be fine.
  • " in "transforming" the British video games industry into a "real multi-national business"." -quoting looks strange here.
  • "However, the other reviewer criticised the game's hard difficulty.[11] Robert Swan of Computer and Video Games criticised the playability of the ZX Spectrum version, calling it "less playable" due to its presentation in monochrome and hard difficulty. Reviewing the GX4000 port, however, Swann praised the "colourful" graphics, however he expressed scepticism over the difficulty." -a lot of howevers!
I fixed it myself.


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♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:17, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Dr. Blofeld: thanks for the review! Sorry I had to leave this abruptly, but I've fixed the funny looking quotations now. I searched through the scans and couldn't find anything related to elevators or "lifts", as I definitely would have mentioned that in the article if they did. JAGUAR  15:28, 20 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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