Talk:Mallzee
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[edit]I've made c. 100 characters of edits, mainly related to grammar. Add the page to some relevant Categories. Add some relevant images e.g. screenshots. Complete the empty sections. Beware of ant perception of 'marketing' content! Try to find more factual information on the company e.g. brands, number of uses, technologies used, etc. Limelightangel (talk) 14:04, 13 November 2015 (UTC)
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[edit]Please consider what value, if any, a picture of the CEO adds to the article? My view is that it is decorative, but illustrates no point in the article. It could be used to show the CEO's face in an article about him, if he passes WP:BIO though. Fiddle Faddle 23:58, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
Need for improved NPOV/removal of promotion
[edit]Substantial parts of the article seem to lack a NPOV and are unreferenced. Examples include most of the Operation and Company overview sections. Sentences such as "In June 2015, Mallzee had almost 300,000 users but the company has defined a target of 1,000,000 users by the end of the year." are more promotional than notable information. Nick bear (talk) 11:45, 2 September 2016 (UTC)