Talk:Live at Third Man Records (Billie Eilish album)/GA1
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 13:58, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
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Short album article, though I will give it proper consideration nevertheless --K. Peake 13:58, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Add the venue parameter to infobox since this was a live recording
- "is a vinyl-exclusive live album by" → "is the debut live album by"
- The release sentence should be swapped with the recording one in the order
- "It was recorded at an acoustic live show with her brother" → "The album was recorded during an acoustic live show with Eilish's brother" with the target
- Remove wikilink on Third Man Records
- "It was officially released as Eilish's first live album on" → "It was released by Third Man Records on"
- "The record received a major drop on" → "Live at Third Man Records experienced a major release on"
- "debuting at number 55 on the" → "debuting at number 55 on the US"
- "selling 13 thousand copies in that week." → "selling 13,000 copies during that week."
- Sure you can't add another sentence to the second para since it is too short?
Background and recording
[edit]- "along with her brother Finneas O'Connell." → "alongside her brother Finneas O'Connell, known under his stage name of Finneas."
- "She performed in front" → "For the show, she performed in front"
- "several tracks off her EP" → "several tracks from her debut EP"
- Add release year of Don't Smile at Me in brackets
- "and her album When We Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go?." → "and her debut studio album When We All Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go? (2019)"
- "The live album is a recording" → "Live at Third Man Records is a recording"
- "then transitions into" → "then transitioned into"
- "the shows "acoustic highlights"." → "the show's "acoustic highlights.""
- "Eilish sings" → "Eilish then performed"
- "the first chorus lyrics." → "the first chorus' lyrics." with the target
- "Eilish continues the performance with" → "She continued the show with performances of"
- "concludes the performance with" → "concluding by performing"
- "Pointing to the live video feed of the recording process," → "In particular, she pointed to the live video feed of the recording process,"
- "also thanked Jack White" → "also thanked White"
- "Eilish mentioned," → "She further mentioned,"
Release and packaging
[edit]- "The album was released independently under Third Man Records on" → "Live at Third Man Records was released independently by Third Man Records"
- "2019 with limited release." → "2019, with a limited release."
- "through two Third Man stores, each in Detroit and Nashville." → "at two Third Man stores, which were in Detroit and Nashville, respectively."
- "On August 29, 2020, during" → "On August 29, 2020, coinciding"
- "the record was made available" → "the album was made available"
- "of the record appear on blue opaque vinyl" → "of Live at Third Man Records appear on blue opaque vinyl" with the target
- "four repeated "Billie Eilish"'s in" → "four repeated displays of "Billie Eilish" in"
- "of the record feature" → "of the album contain"
- "applied by" → "that was applied by"
Reception
[edit]- "described the album" → "described Live at Third Man Records as what"
- "[performance]", and continues saying" → "[performance]," and continued by saying"
- "He concludes with saying" → "He concluded by admitting that"
- "described it as a" → "described the album as a"
- "said it was" → "said it is a"
- "The record received a" → "Live at Third Man Records received a"
- Remove wikilink on Record Store Day
- "sold 13 thousand copies in the sales week ending September 3." → "sold 13,000 copies in the US for the sales week ending September 3, 2020."
- "at number 55 on the" → "at number 55 on the US"
- "The record was the" → "The album was the"
- "which was also the biggest" → "which itself was the biggest"
Track listing
[edit]- A source is required to verify this is the track listing, plus can you find one to add the lengths of each live performance possibly?
Charts
[edit]- Good
References
[edit]- Copyvio score is quite poor at 45.7%; this can be fixed by trimming down quoting though
- Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
- Ref 6 should cite the last name solely in that parameter and the first followed by middle in the first name one
- Cite Rough Trade as publisher instead for ref 10 and target to Rough Trade Records, plus add the original URL alongside the archive
- WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on ref 11
- Eric Alper should only be wikilinked on the author of ref 12 per WP:OVERLINK
- Cite YouTube as the publisher instead for ref 13 with the wikilink
- WP:OVERLINK of Rolling Stone on ref 14
Final comments and verdict
[edit]- On hold but the track listing needs to be sourced more than anything else, or else I am not sure if this may be able to become a GA, sadly. Good luck though, I am glad to have been part of your ever-growing experience! --K. Peake 20:36, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake, I cannot find a source anywhere where it shows the length. Not even the vinyl shows the lengths. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 01:21, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
- The Ultimate Boss You need a source that verifies that being the track listing, even if the lengths are not provided. --K. Peake 07:22, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
- Kyle Peake, you can go ahead and fail the GA nomination. I am having some issues right now with some editors and I think they might complain about this becoming GA. Thanks a lot for all the reviews you have done for me. You are truly the best editor on this website. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 22:34, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
- The Ultimate Boss Are you sure about the fail since the track listing has now been proven it is able to be sourced? --K. Peake 07:44, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
- Kyle Peake, yes I am sure. Bilorv is going to whine about this becoming GA. I just recommend you fail it so we don't have problem with them. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 20:58, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
- This is not an accurate characterisation of my position—see User talk:Bilorv#Heads up for more information. — Bilorv (talk) 22:12, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
- Kyle Peake, yes I am sure. Bilorv is going to whine about this becoming GA. I just recommend you fail it so we don't have problem with them. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 20:58, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
- The Ultimate Boss Are you sure about the fail since the track listing has now been proven it is able to be sourced? --K. Peake 07:44, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
- @The Ultimate Boss: I am not going to take sides between you and Bilorv because I do not know about the issues, though I will ✗ Fail this article per user request to be safe. --K. Peake 01:07, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
- Kyle Peake, you can go ahead and fail the GA nomination. I am having some issues right now with some editors and I think they might complain about this becoming GA. Thanks a lot for all the reviews you have done for me. You are truly the best editor on this website. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 22:34, 30 October 2020 (UTC)