Talk:Lenox Library (New York City)/GA1
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Reviewer: 3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk · contribs) 11:22, 4 January 2018 (UTC)
- In the "Early History" chapter, reference no 1 claims: "He bought them and sold them to Mr. Lenox with a ten percent commission." I could not find this "10 percent" figure on pages 13 or 14, as cited in the reference.
- added other page Eddie891 Talk Work 22:57, 4 January 2018 (UTC)
- Nope. I could not find the "ten percent commission" quote on page 60, neither.--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 09:50, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
- Fixed page Eddie891 Talk Work 13:11, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
- Nope. I could not find the "ten percent commission" quote on page 60, neither.--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 09:50, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
- added other page Eddie891 Talk Work 22:57, 4 January 2018 (UTC)
- Reference no. 3 does not give an exact page number or range in the book.
- In reference no 4, someone added "full citation needed". A full citation is not necessary, and thus needs to be removed from the source. The same goes for reference no 8.
- Reference no 9 cites a Library Journal that has no online access. I thus cannot verify its claim. Is there any url link that can be added?--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 11:22, 4 January 2018 (UTC)
- In Reference 9, a link already exists. Eddie891 Talk Work 16:07, 4 January 2018 (UTC)
- It exists, all right, but I cannot verify any of the specific content that the article claims, because the link offers no search option. Do you have that journal at your disposal? Is there no other (online) source available for these claims?--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 09:50, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
- It's google books. If you click "search in this book", and then type what you want to search, it'll search within the book. The URL is (as listed on the page) https://books.google.com/books?id=8j8DAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA200. Eddie891 Talk Work 13:11, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
- It exists, all right, but I cannot verify any of the specific content that the article claims, because the link offers no search option. Do you have that journal at your disposal? Is there no other (online) source available for these claims?--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 09:50, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
- In Reference 9, a link already exists. Eddie891 Talk Work 16:07, 4 January 2018 (UTC)
3E1I5S8B9RF7 I believe I have responded to all of your issues. Eddie891 Talk Work 13:11, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
Conclusion
[edit]I think the article meets the GA criteria. The issues have been resolved.--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 13:33, 5 January 2018 (UTC)