Talk:Kevin Lokko/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:37, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- Merge first two paras.
- Then instead of "Lokko began his... " -> "He began...
- National League is overlinked.
- "Cup winning" -> "Cup-winning". In both places.
- "became captain at " link for captain?
- "Eaton College" where?
- "After being released by Norwich" reptitive.
- "header" link.
- "what would serve as " what was.
- "injury-time" link.
- "the National League on a season" overlinked.
- "Man of the Match" link.
- "with Stevenage chairman" their chairman.
- Link substitute on the first instance (back in the Early career section).
- Do we have a link for "loan"?
- "clean sheets" link.
- "the COVID-19 pandemic" go for the "in the United Kingdom" article here.
- Link manager on its first instance.
- "non-League" link.
- "Described as" by whom?
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:41, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing the article @The Rambling Man: I have made all of the above changes as you've suggested. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 22:34, 5 September 2021 (UTC)