Talk:Kevin Lokko

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Review: September 6, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:37, 5 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Merge first two paras.
Then instead of "Lokko began his... " -> "He began...
National League is overlinked.
"Cup winning" -> "Cup-winning". In both places.
"became captain at " link for captain?
"Eaton College" where?
"After being released by Norwich" reptitive.
"header" link.
"what would serve as " what was.
"injury-time" link.
"the National League on a season" overlinked.
"Man of the Match" link.
"with Stevenage chairman" their chairman.
Link substitute on the first instance (back in the Early career section).
Do we have a link for "loan"?
"clean sheets" link.
"the COVID-19 pandemic" go for the "in the United Kingdom" article here.
Link manager on its first instance.
"non-League" link.
"Described as" by whom?

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:41, 5 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing the article @The Rambling Man: I have made all of the above changes as you've suggested. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 22:34, 5 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]