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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Katia Bellillo/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:00, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "former Minister" why capital M?
    • Fixed.
  • "the PRC, she joined the PDCI in the" you ought to explain these initialisms before using them, many people won't know what they are without having to click on them.
    • Added.
  • "she was attacked by" physically? Verbally? Make it clear.
    • Added.
  • "Replacing Laura Balbo.." and yet she worked with Balbo?
    • Clarified.
  • Is there a link for "XIV European Affairs Commission"?
    • Unfortunately not.
  • "only receiving 1.77% " no need for "only".
    • Removed.
  • "was physically attacked..." there you go. Okay was there any fall-out from this?
    • Expanded.
  • "referendum on assisted fertilisation" any article for this, even at it.wiki?
    • There is. I have added a link.
  • Fabbrini source has a spared </ref> at the end.
    • Removed.
  • Non-English language citations could use the trans-title parameter for English titles.
    • Added.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:51, 11 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for your thorough review. I have made the amendments and added additional references for the new data. Please tell me if there is anything else you would like done. simongraham (talk) 16:53, 13 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]