Talk:Katia Bellillo/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:00, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"former Minister" why capital M?
- Fixed.
"the PRC, she joined the PDCI in the" you ought to explain these initialisms before using them, many people won't know what they are without having to click on them.
- Added.
"she was attacked by" physically? Verbally? Make it clear.
- Added.
"Replacing Laura Balbo.." and yet she worked with Balbo?
- Clarified.
Is there a link for "XIV European Affairs Commission"?
- Unfortunately not.
"only receiving 1.77% " no need for "only".
- Removed.
"was physically attacked..." there you go. Okay was there any fall-out from this?
- Expanded.
"referendum on assisted fertilisation" any article for this, even at it.wiki?
- There is. I have added a link.
Fabbrini source has a spared </ref> at the end.
- Removed.
Non-English language citations could use the trans-title parameter for English titles.
- Added.

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for your thorough review. I have made the amendments and added additional references for the new data. Please tell me if there is anything else you would like done. simongraham (talk) 16:53, 13 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]