Talk:Island bronze-naped pigeon/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: SilverTiger12 (talk · contribs) 00:13, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

Comments:

• An explanation of what "moderately quick decline" means would be nice.
  • Just what it sounds like, a decline that is moderately quick. The IUCN assessment doesn't have any estimates or anything, so nothing else I can do but quite them.

• Is there anywhere you can link "shade forest" to?
  • Can't find a suitable target article.

• ...hunting pressure on the pigeon may be increasing as a substantial number of young children are involved in hunting. Why does young children being involved mean that the pressure is increasing?
  • Just realized that the IUCN assessment doesn't make this claim, reworded to "may be increasing and a substantial number of young children".

• Range map, please?
  • Added.

• Why is no average weight range given?
  • No measurements.

• Are male and females sexually dimorphic in terms of size, or just coloring?
  • Just coloring.

Birb :) [are tasty] Happy editing, SilverTiger12 (talk) 00:13, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

SilverTiger12, see responses above. AryKun (talk) 13:55, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

Thank you. I'm passing this article now. Happy editing, SilverTiger12 (talk) 13:59, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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