Talk:Isaac Okoro

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Review: May 1, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:49, 1 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 13:49, 1 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead

"Okoro played basketball for McEachern High School in Georgia for four years. As a senior, he helped McEachern win the state championship and achieve national success." - consider merging these two sentences and shortening them accordingly

Early life

"When he was seven to eight years old," - was around seven to
"and grew up in the outskirts of metro Atlanta." - and was raised close to metro Atlanta.

High school career

"Okoro played basketball for" - played high school basketball
"His team closed the regular season" - ended
"and receiving a No. 1 national ranking" - No.
Delink Sharife Cooper because he is already linked in the previous subsection
"Okoro was named to the MaxPreps All-American second team" - not mentioned by USA Today. Please find another source that explicitly states this information

College career

"The following game, he had 17 points" - attained
"Okoro did not play in a game against Missouri on February 15" - in a February 15 game against Missouri
Wikilink hamstring injury
"Okoro was named SEC Freshman of the Week" - spell out SEC out in full and put the acronyms in parentheses
"he announced that he would test the waters for the" - please don't use idioms per MOS:IDIOM and state its literal meaning

National team career

Delink Argentina per MOS:OVERLINK

References

References 24 and 27 should have the work in the publisher field and without www. and com. in them
Both of the above references should also mention the date they were published

Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:12, 1 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: All comments have been addressed Sportzeditz (talk) 16:43, 1 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- @Sportzeditz: Now promoting to GA class. I've made a few changes to the article. MWright96 (talk) 17:30, 1 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Logan Sabers

Awesome 166.181.86.106 (talk) 00:56, 12 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]