Talk:Isaac Okoro/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:49, 1 May 2020 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 13:49, 1 May 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "Okoro played basketball for McEachern High School in Georgia for four years. As a senior, he helped McEachern win the state championship and achieve national success." - consider merging these two sentences and shortening them accordingly

Early life

• "When he was seven to eight years old," - was around seven to
• "and grew up in the outskirts of metro Atlanta." - and was raised close to metro Atlanta.

High school career

• "Okoro played basketball for" - played high school basketball
• "His team closed the regular season" - ended
• "and receiving a No. 1 national ranking" - No.
• Delink Sharife Cooper because he is already linked in the previous subsection
• "Okoro was named to the MaxPreps All-American second team" - not mentioned by USA Today. Please find another source that explicitly states this information

College career

• "The following game, he had 17 points" - attained
• "Okoro did not play in a game against Missouri on February 15" - in a February 15 game against Missouri
• Wikilink hamstring injury
• "Okoro was named SEC Freshman of the Week" - spell out SEC out in full and put the acronyms in parentheses
• "he announced that he would test the waters for the" - please don't use idioms per MOS:IDIOM and state its literal meaning

National team career

• Delink Argentina per MOS:OVERLINK

References

• References 24 and 27 should have the work in the publisher field and without www. and com. in them
• Both of the above references should also mention the date they were published

Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:12, 1 May 2020 (UTC)

• @MWright96: All comments have been addressed Sportzeditz (talk) 16:43, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
  • @Sportzeditz: Now promoting to GA class. I've made a few changes to the article. MWright96 (talk) 17:30, 1 May 2020 (UTC)