Talk:I don't know her/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Your Power (talk · contribs) 14:40, 27 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
Formatting is ok for GA standards. All the newspapers and music and entertainment magazines used are reliable. Interviews are ok. The journal articles and books come from reliable journals and publishers respectively. Will check the other subcriteria sometime
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

An iconic stan culture staple. more things like this need to be GA! taking for review; ping after a week if I haven't started yet ‍ ‍ Elias 🌊 ‍ ‍ ^{💬 "Will you call me?"}
_{📝 "Will you hang me out to dry?"} 14:40, 27 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments go here
- Lopez and Carey photos used in prose are properly used with appropriate captions. Use of the non-free image (the GIF itself) is valid to properly illustrate the meme
- Coverage is good. Quick question, do we have any more sources on Lopez's reaction to the meme (or lack thereof) beyond 2004?
  - Added a 2016 reference
- preparing her debut album Mariah Carey (1990) than with other artists change to "other artists'" with the apostrophe since you're referring to their albums and not themselves
  - Added
- Similar to the discord fomented perhaps simpler language would do ?
  - Changed to "conflict instigated"
- Name the release year for Glitter as you did the other media works
  - Added
- Carey alleges tense inconsistency. ditto with she has a feud and is rude to Lopez
  - Suggest changing to "Carey alleged", "had a feud", and "had been rude to Lopez"
    - Added
- May I ask about the inclusion of the note re. Ashanti?
  - Helps contextualize Carey's claim that Lopez doesn't sing her own songs
- promoting follow-up currently ambiguous; you should specify that album was Carey's
  - Reworded
- The claim "I don't know her" is one of the world's most popular memes strikes me as a bit WP:EXCEPTIONAL, so perhaps more citations beside it (and maybe an attribution?) would make it more GA-compliant
  - It says "one of the most", not "the most", so I don't think it is that exceptional. It does come from CNN. With the amount of coverage and adaptations, its popularity is alluded to in other sources but CNN is the best one says it explicitly.
- Spotchecked a few sources for any OR or failed citations and I don't see any red flags
  - Blair source is okay and supports the "an honest response because she does not know Lopez personally" bit
  - Hill source supports the stuff about Demi Lovato
  - Hyde source is spot-on
  - Weber & Finger supports the quotations used
- Most of the hits on the copyvio director come from quotations, the use of which in the article is reasonable and not excessive

On hold at the moment. Delighted to work with you, @Heartfox! Please ping me once you have replied to all my suggestions ‍ ‍ Elias 🌊 ‍ ‍ ^{💬 "Will you call me?"}
_{📝 "Will you hang me out to dry?"} 04:02, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review and helpful comments Your Power, Heartfox (talk) 21:22, 9 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Wonderful! All my comments have been addressed. Passing... ‍ ‍ Elias 🌊 ‍ ‍ ^{💬 "Will you call me?"}
_{📝 "Will you hang me out to dry?"} 06:58, 11 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]