Talk:Hurricane Pauline (1968)

Hurricane Pauline (1968) has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

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Date	Process	Result
October 28, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed

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Clean it up some more, review the writing, and try and find out more about the tornado. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:40, 1 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:41, 28 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

"near Ciudad Constitución, in Mexico" that comma's not needed.
"Even though, the picture" same, no comma needed.
"October 1 was mostly not helpful due to another electronic problem, however," a semicolon after problem works better here.

Just a few punctuation things. Article's on hold and will be passed when done. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:41, 28 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

All fixed. Thanks for the review. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:58, 28 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:53, 28 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]