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A fact from Hugh of Fauquembergues appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 24 March 2018 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that an arrow killed Hugh of Fauquembergues, Prince of Galilee, in a skirmish when he was returning from a plundering raid?

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 15:18, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:18, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Prose Suggestions

Lede

Baldwin I of Jerusalem granted him Galilee after its first prince, Tancred, who was Baldwin's opponent, suggest Baldwin I of Jerusalem granted him Galilee after its first prince, Tancred, who was a rival of Baldwin,
against Toghtekin, Atabeg of Damascus. suggest against Toghtekin, the Atabeg of Damascus.

Early life

but their conflict was soon resolved. suggest but their conflict was soon made unnecesary.

Prince of Galilee

However, the battle was not lost, because the king made a surprise attack against the Egyptians and defeated them. suggest However, they were not beaten, because the king made a surprise attack against the Egyptians and defeated them.
That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:34, 21 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- @Iazyges:, thank you for your review and assessment. Sorry, I do not understand your above remarks. Do you suggest that the article should be modified? Borsoka (talk) 04:39, 22 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  @Borsoka: No problem. I am suggesting the text that comes first be changed into the text after "suggest". Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:47, 22 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Bad booy — Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.192.232.224 (talk) 17:25, 26 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]