Talk:French cruiser Victor Hugo
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Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 18:01, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
I'll take this on over today and probably into tomorrow. Eddie891 Talk Work 18:01, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
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[edit]- "Right elevation and deck plan as depicted in Brassey's Naval Annual 1923" perhaps "Right elevation and deck plan as depicted in Brassey's Naval Annual 1923"?
- link Otranto Barrage as the "blockade of the Austro-Hungarian Navy in the Adriatic Sea"?
- "reach their designed speed" -> "reach their top speed"? I'm not familiar with such a thing as 'designed speed'
- The speed which the ships were designed to achieve--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:35, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- "anti-torpedo boat defense" maybe just "torpedo boat defense"? I don't think the anti- is needed
- "was fully committed to building" -> "was committed to building"?
- "the ships returned to Jamestown " had they arrived previously?
- Almost certainly, but not explicitly mentioned in the source.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:35, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- our article uses caps for "Naval Review"
- That would only be appropriate if it were a proper name.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:35, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- "not the leisurely 6 knots" could do without 'leisurely'?
- No, it's important to emphasize that Léon Gambetta was basically just puttering along.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:35, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- "and to rebuild the army" maybe specify what army, or say "rebuild their army"?
- "they decided to occupy the" -> "they occupied the"?
- what is the "Salonica Front"?
- "across the bridge over the Corinth Canal on 28 April to interfere" so was it just for one day or for the broader "early 1917"?
- No, between 28 April and 12 June.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:35, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- link Toulon?
That's it from me- all minor stuff, and open to discussion/disagreement. Eddie891 Talk Work 18:24, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for catching all of these; just about all of them needed to be clarified.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:35, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- Sturmvogel 66, I've spotchecked the sources, to the extent that I can access them, and see no issues with reliability, comprehensiveness, prose, copyvio, and neutrality. Happy to promote- Nice work! Eddie891 Talk Work 23:26, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:44, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- Sturmvogel 66, I've spotchecked the sources, to the extent that I can access them, and see no issues with reliability, comprehensiveness, prose, copyvio, and neutrality. Happy to promote- Nice work! Eddie891 Talk Work 23:26, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
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