Talk:First South Yorkshire

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The last sentence in the article needs to be given a neutral view as it seems biased to re-regulation of the buses. -- Matthew Forth 88.109.123.206 18:37, 21 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Added details of criticisms of First, which have been widely covered in local media. These criticisms were removed previously; removing them is not the same as correcting non-neutrality! 89.242.70.160 21:53, 25 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I've done a lot of editing on this page today, as much of the information seemed out of date. While I know that First's service is poor, I can't really find any references for the criticisms section; if whoever wrote that could give an accurate and decent reference I'd be very grateful. Grgrsmth (talk) 14:43, 16 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Updated this again after the introduction of the 'Simplicity' programme. However, I've not had the time to look at all the routes. The section on the Overground needs extensive work. --Grgrsmth (talk) 22:00, 19 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Keith D (talk) 14:50, 25 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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