Talk:Dream Chronicles
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[edit]As it's much more beneficial to list the assessment here given the number of articles, here's an overall assessment for Dream Chronicles, Dream Chronicles 2, The Chosen Child, and The Book of Air. These articles all remain C-Class, but are not far from a B.
B-Class Criteria
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- The Release History can be included in the infobox by using a collapsable list, and the same would go for the respective platforms. The current format is large and obtrusive to the reader.
- The Charts is not notable unless the game was number one, and such things should be placed in the Reception section in a sales paragraph
- The articles use an abundance of blockquotes, which should be used sparingly. I didn't see any quotes that could not be integrated into the regular prose. Additionally, some quotes are rather long, spanning more than 4 lines, which would be a violation of WP:COPYVIO.
- Some articles have maintenance tags. Typically they do not pass B class with tags, unless the content elsewhere in the article is substantial, or the tag is minor.
- Some articles have paragraphs that are a giant wall of text. Paragraphs should be no less than three and no more than ~eight sentences where possible.
- The article leads have references in them. Per WP:LEADCITE, references are only needed in the lead when the same information doesn't exist in the body, however since the lead should be a summary of the body, everything that's cited in the lead should exist in the body and the references moved.
- The leads do not talk of the sales and reception for each game.
Hopefully that wasn't too hard of a hit. There's a lot of good content here, it's mostly a cleanup job. Hopefully that helps. --Teancum (talk) 15:25, 23 December 2010 (UTC)
Image copyright problem with File:Dream Chronicles 2 Lake of Dreams.jpg
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