Talk:Dizzy (Olly Alexander song)/GA1
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Nominator: Nascar9919 (talk · contribs) 00:37, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 14:13, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewing this article like I did in Europapa, thanks! ðTheNuggeteerð
14:13, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- @TheNuggeteer: Pinging as a checkup. It's been over a week since any progress has been made. Are you still able to do this review? Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 02:56, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
Going to review the article. ðTheNuggeteerð
11:36, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- Everything okay! Going to initiate the second wave.
ðTheNuggeteerð
04:13, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
First wave
[edit]Lead
[edit]Nothing wrong with the lead, good job! ðTheNuggeteerð
12:05, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Background and composition
[edit]- It seems like there are a lot of things in source 10 to add to the article.
ðTheNuggeteerð
12:05, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- Added some things. Let me know if you want anything else.
Music video and promotion
[edit]- You could also add source 14 for "Graham Meets Olly".
-  Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 23:54, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- Source 18 does not mention the deconstructed house and the rooftop.
- Fixed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 23:54, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- I suggest you add Release to the section and also make Promotion its own section.
ðTheNuggeteerð
12:05, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
-  Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 23:54, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Second wave
[edit]Critical reception
[edit]- There are multiple reviews in source 32, you can include them.
- Not done. Already included with their separate sources. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Why is source 4 put as "subscription needed" when it's easily accessible?
- Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- You could also add
a tune that doesnât so much spin you right round as sit you down and bore you to tears
from source 31.ðTheNuggeteerð
04:40, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Eurovision Song Contest (up to At Eurovision, 1st paragraph)
[edit]- Source 41 also mentions the people who led the search, you can add it.
-  Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- The source does not mention that the series was the 21st.
- Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- You can add the contents of the letter in source 45.
ðTheNuggeteerð
04:40, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
-  Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Everything looks good, will review the rest (Third wave) later.
ðTheNuggeteerð
04:41, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Everything looks good, will review the rest (Third wave) later.
-  Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Third wave
[edit]At Eurovision (rest)
[edit]- There's more information about the staging in source 51, you can include that.
ðTheNuggeteerð
09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Not particularly sure what you want me to add? It seems like it's detailed enough already; I could be wrong, though. What would you honestly want added?
Credits and personnel
[edit]Everything's okay here. ðTheNuggeteerð
09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Track listing
[edit]- Can't see a source for the length of the extended version and the spinner.
ðTheNuggeteerð
09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Extended version shows up on my end. As for the spinner, removed. Nothing seems to show the times for the spinner. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 16:28, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Charts and release history
[edit]Going to assume they're okay. ðTheNuggeteerð
09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Other comments
[edit]Something's wrong with ref 5. ðTheNuggeteerð
09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 16:28, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- @TheNuggeteer: Done with my edits. Look good to you? Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 16:54, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Everything's done, passing the article.
ðTheNuggeteerð
04:13, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- Everything's done, passing the article.
- @TheNuggeteer: Done with my edits. Look good to you? Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 16:54, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him ⢠t ⢠c) 16:28, 29 August 2024 (UTC)