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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Dizzy (Olly Alexander song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Nascar9919 (talk · contribs) 00:37, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 14:13, 14 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing this article like I did in Europapa, thanks! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 14:13, 14 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TheNuggeteer: Pinging as a checkup. It's been over a week since any progress has been made. Are you still able to do this review? Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • tc) 02:56, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review the article. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 11:36, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Everything okay! Going to initiate the second wave. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:13, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

First wave

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Lead

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Nothing wrong with the lead, good job! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:05, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Background and composition

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  • Added some things. Let me know if you want anything else.

Music video and promotion

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  • You could also add source 14 for "Graham Meets Olly".
  • Source 18 does not mention the deconstructed house and the rooftop.

Second wave

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Critical reception

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  • There are multiple reviews in source 32, you can include them.
  • Why is source 4 put as "subscription needed" when it's easily accessible?
  • You could also add a tune that doesn’t so much spin you right round as sit you down and bore you to tears from source 31. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:40, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Eurovision Song Contest (up to At Eurovision, 1st paragraph)

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  • Source 41 also mentions the people who led the search, you can add it.
  • The source does not mention that the series was the 21st.

Third wave

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At Eurovision (rest)

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  • Not particularly sure what you want me to add? It seems like it's detailed enough already; I could be wrong, though. What would you honestly want added?

Credits and personnel

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Everything's okay here. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Track listing

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Charts and release history

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Going to assume they're okay. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Other comments

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Something's wrong with ref 5. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.