Talk:Dive Bar Tour (Lady Gaga)/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: GagaNutella (talk · contribs) 17:34, 6 March 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review! :) I’ve addressed all your notes. Sricsi (talk) 09:56, 7 March 2023 (UTC)
Infobox/Lead
[edit]- Add a comma after previous tours
Background and development
[edit]- Gaga aimed to be close enough to her audience so that she can look into their eyes while performing, → Gaga aimed to be close enough to her audience to be able to look into their eyes while performing,
- The "Prior the tour" part, change will for would
Concert synopsis
[edit]- Remove the comma after sat down
- who served as co-executive producer for Joanne. → who served as Joanne's co-executive producer.
- telling the audience how they wrote the following song "Grigio Girls" together, which Gaga → telling the public how they wrote the following song, "Grigio Girls", together,
- and was present in the audience. → and was present there.
- "Million Reasons" and "Just Another Day" was performed → "Million Reasons" and "Just Another Day" were performed
- where she reprised "Joanne" and performed → where she reprised "Joanne" and sang
- Gaga debuted new song → Gaga debuted the new song
- the track "Million Reasons", and performed the song. → the track "Million Reasons" and performed it.
- she sang "Angel Down", and changed up the lyrics to reference → she sang "Angel Down" and changed its lyrics to reference
- Talking about her family led to a performance of the track "Joanne". → Talking about her family led to a performance of "Joanne".
- Before performing the final song, → Before singing the final song,
- Remove the comma after crowd-surfed
Critical reception
[edit]- and while she believed that → while believing that
Shows
[edit]- Wikilink United States
References
[edit]- Copy violation score looks good at 37.9%
- Ref 20: add
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Final comments and verdict
[edit]I think this is it. 
On hold until all of the issues are fixed.
- ✓ Pass now. GagaNutellatalk 13:10, 7 March 2023 (UTC)
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