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"promoted the song with live performances." → "promoted the song with a live performance on Like a Version." with the wikilink, as only relevant performance(s) should be mentioned in the lead
Remove Swedish singer introduction to Grant because that being solely in the body is sufficent
"of "Changed My Mind" on 23 November 2018." → "of the song on the tour's beginning date."
"she elaborated that "My idea" → "she elaborated: "My idea"
"she explained that" → "Stryke explained that"
"the line "I changed my mind".[10] As the song progresses," → "the line "I changed my mind" and as it progresses," since these sentences are short enough to be merged
"She said, "At that point" → "The singer said that "at that point" per this not being a full sentence
"best decision ever."" → "best decision ever"." per MOS:QUOTE
@Kyle Peake: Thank you for your patience. I've been really busy with work this last month. Let me know if I've missed any of your comments. I re-arranged the reviews a bit for better flow. Do you have any suggestions on how to organize it better? Pancake (talk) 16:00, 23 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
PancakeMistake This mostly looks good, though there are still a few issues left unfixed. [9] should not be on the audio sample text, the three-minute and five-second part needs to be altered, a comma is required before through in promotion and cover version, url-access limited and subscription both need to be added to the appropriate refs. --K. Peake07:31, 24 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]