Talk:Burning at Both Ends/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 21:01, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

of the month due to bad weather → of the month due to bad weather to finish the album
Add the Dead Press! year end list addition

McTernan, who also acted as the engineer, was assisted Paul Leavitt → missing "by" and the latter worked as an enginner or in production?
Tracking → Recording
following on January 8. → followed on January 8
assisted by Kyle Black → same issue as before
Try to have the sources at the end of the sentences it breaks the reading
tracking → recording

with the exception of "Calaveras", which is credited to the band. → on the track list says it is to Mikey Ambrose the writting
Like a Virgin Saved by the Bell and The Goonies → years of release
"Calaveras" is written by drummer Mikey Ambrose → add it to the first point I make and remove it from the last setence

number 27 on Independent Albums,[50] → move the source to the end of the sentece
AllMusic → second paragraph
Rock Sound → first paragraph
Dead Press! → should be in the first paragraph but the review is quite negative, despite the eight starts, you can choose other instance of the review that is more positive and them move it.

AllMusic source is dead
Noisecreep → publisher
WP:ALBUMAVOID "An artist's social networking site, such as Facebook or Twitter, in addition to personal blogs and forum posts, should largely be avoided. If the information being added from one of these websites is truly notable enough for inclusion, a publication will likely report about".

@Yeepsi: Archive them, as they can go dead at any given time. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:27, 23 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]