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... that when Pehr Kalm explored North America in the mid-1700s, he reported being served apple dumplings(pictured) at every meal? Source: The Oxford Encyclopedia of Food and Drink in America, Volume 1: "botanist Per Kalm, touring from New Jersey to Quebec in 1749-1750, found apple dumplings at every meal"
Comment: Welcome The Rambling Man to review, if he's up for it. This article needs serious help, but I was going to run out of time so I went ahead and nom'd. If it's hopeless, it won't hurt my feelings!
A few [citation needed] tags need to be addressed before we get to passing this nomination. The article has been vastly improved (and meets the fivefold expansion requirement), there's no obvious sign of copyvio, I really do like the hook, but I'll focus on that in due course. One last thing, I wonder if the "preparation" gallery of images would benefit from some explanatory text? The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 19:34, 15 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Dealt with the cn's, which were primarily for the parts of the original article that still remained. A few were prep/ingredient/serving details, and I had to source to cookbooks etc. When I do that I generally try to source to the narrative sections, but occasionally ingredient details can only be found in ingredient lists within an actual recipe. In these cases I try to source from respected cookbooks and to make sure a particular ingredient assertion is traditional/non-controversial. --valereee (talk) 14:46, 16 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Do you think this would work better? It's not very colorful. Probably isn't going to get selected for an image slot, I suspect. There are just too many beautiful or interesting non-bio images. --valereee (talk) 16:21, 18 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
A fact from Apple dumpling appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 1 September 2019 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
Did you know... that when Pehr Kalm explored North America in the mid-1700s, he reported being served apple dumplings(pictured) at every meal?
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remarkably straight forward. Article is good condition, hook is interesting about what, at face value, is quite a banal subject. Good work. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 14:22, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
