Talk:Andrew Devane

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Writing

Too much of this article is in bullet-point format. The Selected Works section is problematic as well: (1) Whose selection? [might be original research] (2) It's way too exhaustive to be useful as a list of most notable structures. (3) There are myriad inconsistencies in punctuation and layout. I'd suggest cutting the whole section and replacing it with a sourced statement (maybe from an obituary or an article in an architecture magazine?) saying his most notable works include X, Y, and Z (not necessarily three, but definitely not dozens). Q·L·1968 ☿ 18:01, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

List article

Might be worth creating a separate list of his buildings to remove the long list from this article? Similar to Stained glass windows by Harry Clarke? Would allow for the addition of images, which might be more informative than just deleting large parts of the list. Smirkybec (talk) 10:44, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]