Talk:270 Park Avenue (1960–2021)
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Splitting into two articles
[edit]- The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
- The result of this discussion was to split into three articles. WikiRedactor (talk) 21:51, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Does it make sense to split this article into two pages for the old and new buildings respectively? 74.64.122.27 (talk) 15:51, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
Pretty sure that would be the best thing to do, since the new building is arguably more significant and I think a combination article would be quite long once the new building is finished. --Galebazz (talk) 18:25, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
- Yes, I think we should split this page. Actually, I believe we should split this page into three: Hotel Marguery, what was originally the Union Carbide Building, and the new JPMorgan headquarters. The hotel is not relevant to the other two topics aside from the fact that it occupies the same site. The Union Carbide Building similarly has a distinct history and architecture from the new tower, and that is the topic of the interwiki links, so that building should remain the topic for the present article. The new headquarters should be split into another article. The only issue is what to name the page about the new headquarters, since we cannot have two articles with the same name, unless the Union Carbide article is called "270 Park Avenue (1960–2019)" or something. Epicgenius (talk) 00:33, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
- Agree on split into three. While the hotel article might be a stub at first, it will certainly encourage more edits on that article than as part of a subsection (see: Meta:structuralism). Pinging Galebazz due to consensus. A. C. Santacruz ⁂ Talk 09:32, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
- just realized I pinged the wrong person due to not seeing the IP. My bad. Sorry Galebazz! I'll split myself. A. C. Santacruz ⁂ Talk 09:36, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
- Actually I'll wait to see what they have to say about the 3-way split. A. C. Santacruz ⁂ Talk 09:37, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
- No worries about the ping! If you wanted to hear my opinion on the split in to three, I think it is a good idea. Galebazz (talk) 10:08, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
- just realized I pinged the wrong person due to not seeing the IP. My bad. Sorry Galebazz! I'll split myself. A. C. Santacruz ⁂ Talk 09:36, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
- I like the idea of a three way split too. Just need to make sure they have helpful hatnotes and that someone checks all the incoming links once it's done. 81.177.27.61 (talk) 18:25, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
- I was going to suggest moving this page to 270 Park Avenue (1960–2019) to preserve the page history, but this works too. Epicgenius (talk) 01:31, 21 April 2022 (UTC)
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 01:56, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:56, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
Sources are reliable.
- The image File:270 Park Avenue Photomontage.jpg says it's a derivative work of this, but there seems to be no resemblance between the two.
- "The Union Carbide Building received mixed criticism during its existence." Don't you mean "mixed reception" -- i.e. some praise and some criticism? "Mixed criticism" means various kinds of criticism.
- Suggest redlinking General Bronze; I get 93 hits in the NYT alone.
- "The site of the plaza was supposed to be part of a northward extension of Vanderbilt Avenue to 49th Street, which the New York Central Railroad had built in 1913 but never deeded to the government of New York City": what had the railroad built in 1913? As written this says it was 49th Street, but that can't be right.
- "Since there were only six platforms on the upper level that extended to 47th Street." Incomplete sentence.
-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:18, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks for the comments @Mike Christie. I have addressed all of these issues now:
- I removed the image.
- I changed "mixed criticism" to "mixed reception". I was thinking of two things at once at the time: "criticism" and "mixed commentary", and I combined them.
- The red link has been added.
- I clarified that this refers to Vanderbilt Avenue.
- The sentence has been corrected.
- – Epicgenius (talk) 21:49, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
Fixes look good; passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 21:54, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 08:33, 15 September 2022 (UTC)
- ... that the Union Carbide Building, once the world's tallest building designed by a woman, was later the world's tallest building to be demolished peacefully? Source: Salmon, Felix (April 23, 2022). "JPMorgan unveils design of new headquarters". Axios.
- ALT1: ... that for half a century, the Union Carbide Building was the world's tallest building designed by a woman? Source: Salmon, Felix (April 23, 2022). "JPMorgan unveils design of new headquarters". Axios.
- ALT2: ... that for most of its existence, the Union Carbide Building was the world's tallest building designed by a woman? Source: Salmon, Felix (April 23, 2022). "JPMorgan unveils design of new headquarters". Axios. The building held this record for 50 years, and the building existed for 61 years.
- ALT3: ... that during the Union Carbide Building's construction, materials had to be stored several miles away because of railroad tracks in the basement? Source: Mulligan, Hugh A. (May 25, 1958). "Today's Skyscrapers Can Be Built Without Throwing Traffic Into Snarl". Press and Sun-Bulletin. p. 2.
- ALT4: ... that in 1976, Union Carbide bought its headquarters building, from which it was relocating? Source: "News of the Realty Trade". The New York Times. August 29, 1976.
- ALT5: ... that Union Carbide bought 270 Park Avenue in 1976 while moving out of the building? Source: "News of the Realty Trade". The New York Times. August 29, 1976.
- ALT6: ... that less than a decade after 270 Park Avenue underwent the most extensive renovation in its history, the building was completely demolished? Source: "JPMorgan Chase gets LEED Platinum for 270 Park Avenue headquarters". NYREJ. March 26, 2012; Davidson, Justin (May 17, 2021). "What If New York Stopped Knocking Down Buildings?". Intelligencer.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/West Farms Soldiers Cemetery
Improved to Good Article status by Epicgenius (talk). Self-nominated at 13:48, 30 August 2022 (UTC).
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QPQ: - Not done
Overall: Another great article in this significant and ongoing series by Epicgenius. ALT 2 is more hooky IMO. No Swan So Fine (talk) 14:40, 30 August 2022 (UTC)
- @No Swan So Fine: Thanks for the review. I have now done a QPQ. Epicgenius (talk) 12:55, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
- relying on No Swan So Fine's original review, I'll give this a tick. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 20:34, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
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