Talk:270 Park Avenue (1960–2021)/GA1

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 01:56, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sources are reliable.

The image File:270 Park Avenue Photomontage.jpg says it's a derivative work of this, but there seems to be no resemblance between the two.
"The Union Carbide Building received mixed criticism during its existence." Don't you mean "mixed reception" -- i.e. some praise and some criticism? "Mixed criticism" means various kinds of criticism.
Suggest redlinking General Bronze; I get 93 hits in the NYT alone.
"The site of the plaza was supposed to be part of a northward extension of Vanderbilt Avenue to 49th Street, which the New York Central Railroad had built in 1913 but never deeded to the government of New York City": what had the railroad built in 1913? As written this says it was 49th Street, but that can't be right.
"Since there were only six platforms on the upper level that extended to 47th Street." Incomplete sentence.

Thanks for the comments @Mike Christie. I have addressed all of these issues now:

I removed the image.
I changed "mixed criticism" to "mixed reception". I was thinking of two things at once at the time: "criticism" and "mixed commentary", and I combined them.
The red link has been added.
I clarified that this refers to Vanderbilt Avenue.
The sentence has been corrected.