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Good article1903 Atlantic hurricane season has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic star1903 Atlantic hurricane season is the main article in the 1903 Atlantic hurricane season series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
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July 12, 2016Good article nomineeListed
October 31, 2016Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 16:21, 11 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]


  • "The second storm, known as the Jamaica hurricane" - who called it that? Ditto the other two. Unless they were actually called that, just pipe the link to something like hurricane striking Jamaica or something
  • "This was the most hurricanes in a season since there were 8 hurricanes in 1893." --> "This marked the most hurricanes in a season since the total of eight in 1893." - this way it reads better
  • "Reanalysis also resulted in the eighth cyclone being downgraded from a Category 2 hurricane to a tropical storm" - how come you don't mention this in the section for TS 8?
  • "before turning to the northeastward"
  • "Around 12:00 UTC." - this is kinda on its own. Was it for the previous sentence or the latter?
  • "A tropical storm was first observed about 835 mi (1,345 km) northeast of Cayenne, French Guiana, early on August 6" - not sure if half of the readers have ever heard off French Guiana, and maybe 5% have heard of Cayenne. Isn't there a better location you could provide, that people would know better?
  • " In North Carolina, poor weather conditions in Kitty Hawk prevented the Wright brothers from flying their glider or assembling the untested airplane." - cool!
  • "Seventy telegraph lines were also damaged after a conduit flooded." --> "A flooded conduit damaged 70 telegraph lines." - cleaner
  • Change the links in the "See also" to something more useful, such as the contemporaneous EPAC season perhaps? Or to other similar seasons?

All in all a good article, this should be an easy one. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:21, 11 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]