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Ladakh Human Analogue Mission

I created article Ladakh Human Analogue Mission I request everyone to review and contribute to it.Thanks. Edasf (talk) 13:53, 2 November 2024 (UTC)

The content seems to be almost directly copied from the sources.
For example:
From the "Times of India": "The proposed research station would serve multiple purposes: Testing platform for space technologies, advancing Technology Readiness Levels (TRL), engineering integration, human studies, and crew training for geological and astrobiological research"
From the article: "The projected research station would be used for geological and astrobiological research, human studies, crew training, advancing Technology Readiness Levels (TRL), testing space technologies, and engineering integration"
"Testing platform for space technologies" becomes "testing space technologies"
"advancing Technology Readiness Levels (TRL)" remains the same, as does "engineering integration" and "human studies"
"crew training for geological and astrobiological research" is only divided into different sections. Redacted II (talk) 16:51, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
And, to be frank, it at times seems to be written without any regard for basic grammar rules: "Mission aims to make suitable interplanetary conditions for astronaut training." It also is promotional: "With an emphasis on sustainability (buzzword), resource efficiency (buzzword), and adaptability (buzzword) to challenging space conditions, AAKA Space Studio will explore innovative (in my opinion, nearly every article that uses this word without providing further details on what makes it innovative is promotional) habitat designs."
It's a good start, but it needs lots of copyedits. Titan(moon)003 (talk) 16:13, 7 November 2024 (UTC)