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01:23, 23 September 2024 review of submission by DeCraziest Music Empire

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Please what will be the title of my draft for submission? DeCraziest Music Empire (talk) 01:23, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@DeCraziest Music Empire, I don't understand your question. But if it helps, your draft is here: Draft:GentleStar DC. -- asilvering (talk) 04:02, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

07:50, 23 September 2024 review of submission by G11slm

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Hi, I have created this article, but I get warning that, there are some promotional items in it. I do not promote anything in it. So, If there are any promotional items, can you help to remove them? G11slm (talk) 07:50, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The entire draft was promotional, and has now been deleted. If you are associated with this company, that must be disclosed, see conflict of interest and paid editing(note that "paid editing" includes employment in any capacity).
Wikipedia is not a place to just tell about a company and what it does- instead, you should summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable company. 331dot (talk) 08:00, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

10:19, 23 September 2024 review of submission by Dharam iibs

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Could you please me to get the article approved. We are the established business school in bangalore having the approved by the various govt. authority. Dharam iibs (talk) 10:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Dharam iibs: you need to show that the school meets our notability guideline for businesses and organisations, WP:ORG. The sources currently cited don't come even close.
First, though, you must disclose your conflict of interest, by placing the {{paid}} template on your user page User:Dharam iibs. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:26, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
PS: Please don't create multiple drafts on the same subject. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:27, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

10:55, 23 September 2024 review of submission by Yamb0x eth

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Hello,

I recently submitted my draft article on Yam Ben Adiva (Draft:Yam Ben Adiva), but it was declined. I believe the subject meets notability criteria due to coverage in reliable sources like Haaretz, Maxon, and Visual Atelier 8. Could you please clarify the specific reasons for the decline? Was it due to notability, tone, lack of citations, or another issue? Any guidance on improving the draft for approval would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you! Yamb0x eth (talk) 10:55, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yamb0x eth: Read WP:SIGCOV and WP:GNG. The cited sources do not provide significant coverage of the subject, only passing mentions or quotes. Interviews or statements by the subject are WP:PRIMARY sources, which cannot establish notability. GrabUp - Talk 11:05, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yamb0x eth I fixed your links, they need "Draft:" at the beginning. 331dot (talk) 11:08, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

12:32, 23 September 2024 review of submission by Johnwin30

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Need to know why it is rejected and can not be submitted for review again. Johnwin30 (talk) 12:32, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The reason is clearly stated: "This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia." Are you a professional content editor as well? Any particular reason you created your account six days after another account was blocked? 331dot (talk) 12:35, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No, i am not editor or anything. just scene this article that why i ask this question. Lookalike i am related to this but just learning what not to do in Wikipedia. Johnwin30 (talk) 12:43, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
What is your relationship with this topic? 331dot (talk) 12:45, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Johnwin30, the draft is overtly promotional and utterly unacceptable for Wikipedia. You are editing Wikipedia and therefore you are a Wikipedia editor and need to follow Wikipedia's Policies and guidelines just like all other editors. Cullen328 (talk) 06:17, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

14:21, 23 September 2024 review of submission by VvS77qq

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Sorry to bother the community again. But copy-paste-answers like "at least a dozen paragraphs" just do not help me in improving the article. Why not giving at least one example where a reference is missing. Obviously not every sentence can or must be referenced. I double-checked the article and could not find any shortcomings in comparison with other articles and their references. So, I would be very thankful if anyone could give me some practical support on this issue. VvS77qq (talk) 14:21, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

VvS77qq I fixed your link, you need the "Draft:" portion. Please see Other Stuff Exists; it could be that these other articles you have seen are also inappropriate and just not addressed yet by volunteers. If you want to use other articles as a model or example, use those that are classified as good articles, which have been checked by the community.
The awards section should just be removed, as awards do not contribute to notability unless the awards themselves merit articles(like Nobel Peace Prize or Academy Award). The rest of the draft just summarizes the offerings of the company and its routine activities. An article about a company must summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable company. This may be different from the German Wikipedia, a separate project with its own editors and policies. 331dot (talk) 14:38, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I would also ask you if you work for this company. 331dot (talk) 14:39, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The first paragraph of the "History" section has no citations. The first citation, even if it were about a notable award, is a non-independent source recording an award to the people, not the company, and is therefore triply useless for establishing that the company is notable. The second and third citations are not about the company, and so are useless for establishing that the company is notable. The fourth citation might be useful, but it is not clear whether it is independent or based on press release. In any case, it has only a couple of paragraphs about the company. The fifth and sixth citations do not even mention Bokela, and so are not just useless for establishing notability, but serve absolutely no purpose in this article.
I didn't go any further. ColinFine (talk) 20:10, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

18:42, 23 September 2024 review of submission by 39.58.235.138

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Yrf film 39.58.235.138 (talk) 18:42, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure what your question is, but the draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. See WP:NFF, unreleased films rarely merit articles, and certainly not if principal photography has not commenced, or mere speculation of a possible film. 331dot (talk) 18:48, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
An unreferenced one sentence draft will never be accepted. Cullen328 (talk) 05:58, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

20:10, 23 September 2024 review of submission by Librariesforall

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Hi there! I'm new here and just submitted this draft for review. I think that's what I need to do as a new user for the article to be published? Or am I off base. Many thanks! Librariesforall (talk) 20:10, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You have successfully submitted your draft to the pile for review. At some point (could be minutes, could be months) a reviewer will pick it up and review it, and do one of three things:
  • accept it and move it to mainspace,
  • decline it, and give you reasons why it is not acceptable in its current form
  • reject it, if they think that it cannot be made into an acceptable article (usually because the subject does not meet Wikipedia's criteria for notability, but sometimes for other reasons, eg it is purely promotional).
ColinFine (talk) 22:13, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I took a *quick* look at it. It will entirely depend if she is Notable, and I don't really have a feeling for that type of notability. The wikicode is done pretty well.Naraht (talk) 22:24, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Declined due to WP:RS concerns. I don't think using Medium was allowed in that case. Correct me if I'm wrong here. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 03:43, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Librariesforall, most of your references are to articles authored by Dawn and are therefore useless for establishing her notability. Completely independent sources are required. Medium (website) contains user generated content and is not a reliable source for use on Wikipedia. She seems to be a mid-level civil servant and mid-level academic. Neither is a plausible claim of notability. Cullen328 (talk) 05:56, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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