Wikipedia:Peer review/X (manga)/archive2
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I've listed this article for peer review because I am to restore its GA status in the future. I'm currently busy with other articles, but I also thought about bring X's GA status. However, I wasn't the original main contributor to this article when it originally became GA. As a result, I tried cleaning it up by bringing more sources and trimming areas from the series' production that seem original research. There is also the issue of free image. The X manga suffered from a hiatus due to similar earthquakes that happened in Japan and I don't know where they should be used. The same goes with the first English manga volume cover that displays the first Western title. Thanks, Tintor2 (talk) 23:30, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
Hello. I don't have much to offer but briefly looking through the article, the Australian and UK license for the TV show are never mentioned at all in the TV series section. The show airing on Encore Action in NA and Animax in South Africa are also never mentioned nor cited in said TV series section. The AU license for the manga is also not mentioned nor cited in the manga section. Link20XX (talk) 23:55, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
@Link20XX: Thanks. I think I added all licenses from the infobox. Some sites were archived.Tintor2 (talk) 00:56, 8 January 2021 (UTC)
@Tintor2: You still haven't provided a citation for the series airing on Encore Action in the US or on Animax in South Africa. Link20XX (talk) 01:11, 8 January 2021 (UTC) @Link20XX: Oh yeah. I remember trying do research for that when working on episode list so I removed it.Tintor2 (talk) 01:21, 8 January 2021 (UTC)
- "The television series is considered a better adaptation than the feature film". Sounds non-neutral. "By critics" is better, IMO. Generally speaking, manga reception it's most important and should be longer than adaptations reception. There's nothing more to say about the manga?--User:TeenAngels1234 (talk) 10:44, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
- Tried expanding the manga about the relationship between the two leads.Tintor2 (talk) 14:01, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
- It looks fine now. Well, give me just some time to read the whole article and I'm gonna share the points here.--User:TeenAngels1234 (talk) 14:19, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
- PS. There's a red link in the lead incipit. Well, while red links are OK for a GA, can you make it blue? The problem is that the link itself sounds doubious to me. Are ESPers a mythological figure? Medium (or yoshiro) of course are, but I never heard of it in real folklore. Also, there's no need to ping me. I'm gonna surely follow the PR; I watched the anime some time ago on an Italian TV. My memories are bad, but I wish I can help.--User:TeenAngels1234 (talk) 14:22, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
- Removed red link. There is no specific way of calling the characters. Subaru for example is an omnyoji.Tintor2 (talk) 14:28, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
- That quotebox in Manga Reception is large. Is that essential?--User:TeenAngels1234 (talk) 23:42, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
- Removed.Tintor2 (talk) 00:15, 14 January 2021 (UTC)