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The Last Song (film)

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I'd like to eventually nominate this article for GA status- although I'm not sure I can, seeing as it is an article on an unreleased film. Still, I feel I've covered available information well and the article may meet WP:WIAGA #3 in that way. At any rate, feedback on the article's issues (style, prose, grammar, content) would be highly appreciated. Thanks, Liquidluck (talk) 02:27, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

• Comment: I just wanted to say that you would not be able to have this article promoted to Good Article status until the film is released. Reception information is a critical part of coverage for a contemporary film like this. At first glance, the article appears to be in very good shape, so if you can add reception information upon the film's release, it would be a solid GA candidate. I will try to come back and review this article, although I just found out about PRs for four other film articles. If you have not, it may be worth reviewing the guidelines to see best practices for writing film articles. Erik (talk | contribs) 19:15, 2 September 2009 (UTC)

Thank you for answering that question! Take your time, but I look forward to reading your comments if you can return. Liquidluck (talk) 00:57, 3 September 2009 (UTC)

Quick comment; the turtle image should be right-aligned per MOS:IMAGE because it disconnects the text from the header. Great work by the way.--Music26/11 22:43, 5 September 2009 (UTC)

 Done Thanks! Liquidluck (talk) 01:48, 8 September 2009 (UTC)

Most of the article has Miley Cyrus repeated all over the place. Ex: "Tish Cyrus, Miley Cyrus's mother, serves as the film’s executive producer.[1] Miley Cyrus herself chose the name "Ronnie" for her character. The plot of the film and novel remained secret throughout development." It should be changed to only "Cyrus." -- Ipodnano05 (talk) 20:42, 6 September 2009 (UTC)

 Done Thanks! I used Miley Cyrus there, next to Billy Ray Cyrus, and in "Miley Cyrus and her family" in order to avoid confusion over which Cyrus I was referring to, but I think I reworded the phrases so that it wouldn't be confusing or use "Miley Cyrus". Liquidluck (talk) 01:48, 8 September 2009 (UTC)

Comment: The article has grown quite a bit (around 15 KB) since I nominated it, has new sections and images, and has changed formats, so if you have already looked at the article and found nothing to comment on, would you please look again? Thanks! Liquidluck (talk) 23:33, 19 September 2009 (UTC)