Wikipedia:Peer review/Marcus Rashford/archive1

Marcus Rashford

I've listed this article for peer review because I am looking to get it to Good Article status. Please respond swiftly and give me any feedback needed to improve this article.

Thanks, ArsenalGhanaPartey (talk) 16:51, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments by Henni147

I'm not an expert for the prose part, but I can give a quick feedback to the table formatting in the career statistics section:

• The List of international goals scored by Marcus Rashford looks good already. I added scope-row parameters for better accessibility of the table and changed the legend to a bulleted list to avoid " : " in the plain text.
• What could be done to further improve the table is to split the venue column into venue, city and country, so that you can sort after all three parameters.
• Also, to reduce overlinking, it's enough to link entries like Wembley Stadium once in the first row and remove the link from other identical entries. Another option is to use the rowspan parameter for UEFA Euro 2020 qualification. That would not only reduce the number of links, but also visually structure the table better (it would stress that Rashford has scored multiple goals in the same competition).
• I turned the other two tables into a sortable ones as well, with the club and division column skipped to keep the first table horizontally as narrow as possible. The national team column in the small table below feels superfluous at this point as well, as Rashford has only played for England so far. If he changes clubs or plays in another division, I suggest to create a separate table or (if it doesn't blow up the current ones horizontally) to put the missing column back (but only if really needed). However, if this goes against the manual of style for soccer players' bios pages, please feel free to undo the changes.

I hope, the comments helped a bit. Best wishes Henni147 (talk) 11:22, 20 December 2021 (UTC)