Wikipedia:Peer review/Kingda Ka/archive1

Kingda Ka

As a part of an improvement drive over at WikiProject Roller Coasters, I'd quite like to get this article up to scratch. I'm already aware that there's a severe lack of references and I'm already working on getting them in. What I think the article really needs is a review from the POV of a non-enthusiast, with the intention of getting this up to GA. Many thanks! Seaserpent⁸⁵ _Talk 18:16, 22 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Good article. Here are a few minor suggestions:

Put the aviation concern into its own paragraph. Did this affect the design process or cause a delay in opening the ride?
The line "passes by the lockers." What lockers? Is this significant?
The braking fins should be discussed in the ride overview, before the section on the malfunction.
Is a picture available showing riders in the car, restraints in place?
Is a picture available showing a car in action on the track?

VisitorTalk 08:09, 6 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 02:06, 15 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]