Wikipedia:Peer review/Kingda Ka/archive1

Kingda Ka

As a part of an improvement drive over at WikiProject Roller Coasters, I'd quite like to get this article up to scratch. I'm already aware that there's a severe lack of references and I'm already working on getting them in. What I think the article really needs is a review from the POV of a non-enthusiast, with the intention of getting this up to GA. Many thanks! Seaserpent⁸⁵_Talk 18:16, 22 August 2007 (UTC)

Good article. Here are a few minor suggestions:

• Put the aviation concern into its own paragraph. Did this affect the design process or cause a delay in opening the ride?
• The line "passes by the lockers." What lockers? Is this significant?
• The braking fins should be discussed in the ride overview, before the section on the malfunction.
• Is a picture available showing riders in the car, restraints in place?
• Is a picture available showing a car in action on the track?

VisitorTalk 08:09, 6 September 2007 (UTC)

• Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 02:06, 15 September 2007 (UTC)