Wikipedia:Peer review/Eluru/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because, it have had gone under major constructive edits from 2016. After experienced editors gave me some suggestions, I'll correct/add them and will submit this article to GA nomination.
Thanks, IM3847 (talk) 14:33, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
There are some issues I found while reading this article.
- Per the manual of style the lead should summarize everything in this article so I would suggest expand it to at least two paragraphs.
- Avoid small sections (for example: Etymology only has two sentences).
- There are times when tables and images clash with the text. Try rearranging them
- Notable personalities is unsourced.
- Some references need formatting.
Anyway, good luck with the article. If possible, would you comment on my peer review? Cheers.Tintor2 (talk) 19:51, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
- @Tintor2: I'm sorry, I haven't seen this till date, I would have reviewed Sasuke article as a anime lover. Pardon me.--IM3847 (talk) 05:47, 24 November 2018 (UTC)