Wikipedia:Peer review/Croxton Play of the Sacrament/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like suggestions on how to make this article better.
Thanks, Jre1991 (talk) 04:49, 6 November 2017 (UTC)
Well there are some issues that I found so I hope you can improve the article based on them:
- The lead should be expanded to at least two paragraphs as it meant to serve as a introduction to all the article's sections.
- Some section should also be further expanded. If not possible, I would advise combining them.
- Remember to reference every single paragraph per WP:Verifiability.
- Characters section is unsourced as well as summary
- Avoid the vimeo link at Performance History and instead transform it into a reference.
- The summary might be rearranging. I would request help to the guild of copyeditors.
I hope this helps. If you have free time I wonder if you could check my peer review. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 20:10, 30 December 2017 (UTC)