Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of birds of Tuvalu/archive1

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The list was archived by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 7 June 2022 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of birds of Tuvalu

Nominator(s): AryKun (talk) 13:28, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Another bird list for a small Pacific island country. Reworked it a few weeks ago and I think it's ready for FLC now, so have at it. AryKun (talk) 13:28, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Pseud 14

Great work and a fantastic read overall. A few comments from someone who is unfamiliar with the topic and is generally not my area of Wikipedia-interest:

Perhaps you can link the first instance of atolls instead of the one in the second paragraph. As I see you have already defined reef islands in the enclosure.
- Done.
Would there be a way to briefly define avifauna similarly to how you did with reef islands?
- Done.
That's all for me. --Pseud 14 (talk) 15:08, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support --Pseud 14 (talk) 02:58, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

If you have some spare time or inclination, would appreciate feedback on my FLC as well. Though not mandatory at all

TRM

Suggest a map showing where Tuvalu is would be helpful. Most of our readers won't have a clue where it might be located on planet Earth.
Gilbert and Ellice Islands has an article!
In fact, I would look at the Tuvalu article and even borrow some of the geography information from there to really contextualise the location.
"from 2,500–3,500 mm" could probably switch to cm!
Having said that, our article says it has an average precipitation of 3,500mm, not that range you give here.
"very weakly developed" what does that mean?
"Vegetation on the islands is predominantly" maybe to get round the awkward "is" here, you could say "Vegetation on the islands predominantly consists of..."?
Why are the reef-heron and imperial-pigeon hyphenated when our articles don't do that?
"globally threatened" probably a good time to introduce IUCN and their categorisation here.
"the avifauna (birds) of Tuvalu" any real need for "avifauna" here?
"tags are commonly occurring native species" is "commonly occurring" required here?
"Charadriiformes" is overlinked but I guess it's a case of IAR here as they're in separate sections of a navigable list...
The portal templates crush the refs, use a {{clear}} after them to avoid this.

That's it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:23, 17 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@AryKun: Are you still pursuing this nomination? --Pres N 21:37, 31 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@PresN, I'd like to withdraw this nom. AryKun (talk) 05:04, 6 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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