Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Trina awards/archive1
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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was not promoted by User:The Rambling Man 11:13, 3 August 2008 [1].
Gary King (talk) 02:32, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose: Intro needs work; it's short, and the bit about her race seems misplaced or unneeded. Also, Miami should be linked, and shouldn't there be a comma after Florida? And the bit about her style is clearly copied from her article, though some other lists you've just nominated carry no statement on the singer's style. My point being, there's a dearth of quality prose in this list. --Golbez (talk) 12:24, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]- It's been reworked and expanded now. Gary King (talk) 16:55, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Oppose withdrawn. --Golbez (talk) 20:51, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- It's been reworked and expanded now. Gary King (talk) 16:55, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments'
- Could we enhance the opening sentence to avoid the perennial "This is a list of awards..."?
- No images at all (silly question I guess)...?
- Are there any on-line references which help support the (I assume) physical Billboard references, such as [10], [12] and [14]?
- Ref 6 has The Sun as the work - is that the British tabloid? Not usually considered a reliable source...?
- Hip-hop or Hip-Hop? Consistency including the references please!
- The Rambling Man (talk) 12:19, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- All done. I usually snatch a free image from the musician's article; otherwise, I look on Commons and a few other free places like Flickr (with the correct licenses) but couldn't find one. I replaced the Billboard ones (which are magazine references) with others. The Sun is from California :) (I clarified this). "Hip-Hop" in most cases except for "an American hip-hop magazine." because it's usually lowercased since it's not a proper noun; in the other cases, it's used in the name of an awards show which is why they are capitalized. Gary King (talk) 17:44, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support: Great job :). --Be Black Hole Sun (talk) 11:12, 2 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Just one thing -- With one award and 12 nominations shouldn't this be moved to List of Trina awards and nominations? Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 16:43, 2 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- With just one award and 12 nominations, is this page even necessary? Could it not easily be merged into one table and placed in the main Trina article? -- Scorpion0422 01:34, 3 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Actually, I wouldn't have a problem with that. Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 04:58, 3 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- With just one award and 12 nominations, is this page even necessary? Could it not easily be merged into one table and placed in the main Trina article? -- Scorpion0422 01:34, 3 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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