Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Pau Grand Prix winners/archive1

Nominator(s): EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 14:23, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The Pau Grand Prix is a motor race held on the Circuit de Pau-Ville street circuit in the commune of Pau in southwestern France. Famous names such as Lewis Hamilton, Alberto Ascari, Juan Manuel Fangio, Jim Clark, Jackie Stewart, René Arnoux and Tazio Nuvolari have won this race that has been held to the rules of various racing categories over the years. All comments are welcome EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 14:23, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"The ACBB was first inspired to hold race" => "The ACBB was first inspired to hold a (or possibly the) race"
The key looks a bit odd with the bullet before each symbol, I would be tempted to remove the bullets (and replace with a colon for indentation)
Done this as a table instead EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 18:26, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"Star design denotes multiple races were held" - I think simply "Denotes that multiple races were held" is fine. You don't say "dagger denotes..." and "double dagger denotes...." for the other two
Think that's it! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:48, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Edits have been made to the article based on the issues raised above EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 18:26, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:28, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

While sorting the table, the years when the race wasn't held sometimes comes on top. You'll have to ensure that it sorts at the bottom.

I couldn't find any other problems with table accessibility. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 09:18, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@MPGuy2824: I believe I have made the necessary amendments to the table that you raised EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 10:34, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Since one of the rows has two references, the column header for the last column can be changed to {{Ref.}}. I trust you'll fix this. Support promotion on table accessibility and prose. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 08:50, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

city street track in the centre of Pau, in the Pyrénées-Atlantiques department of southwestern France. the sentence structure here is weird for me, but maybe that is because I am American and just used to "CITY, STATE". Maybe adding a commune would achieve what you are trying to say in a little bit clearer way?
The ACBB was first inspired to hold the race in 1933 after the success of the Monaco Grand Prix as well as other races in Nice and Nîmes I believe you need a comma after "Prix"
on a podium seems superfluous and I would recommend deleting
for the longest wait between two victories change "wait" to "period" or something similar, implies he was just waiting around
Signature have the most wins of any team with seven shouldn't it be "has". Its a team, right? So "The Signature Team has".

@Gonzo fan2007: Have made edits to the list in response to the issues raised above EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 17:01, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:25, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]