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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 12:25, 7 August 2023 (UTC) [1].[reply]
List of Mckenna Grace performances (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Pamzeis (talk) 13:48, 16 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Mckenna Grace is an actress who has appeared in Captain Marvel, Young Sheldon, Once Upon a Time, The Young and the Restless, Annabelle Comes Home, Ghostbusters: Afterlife, A Friend of the Family, I, Tonya, Malignant, Chilling Adventures of Sabrina, CSI: Crime Scene Investigation, The Angry Birds Movie, The Vampire Diaries, K.C. Undercover, Scoob!, Spirit Untamed, The Lion Guard and The Haunting of Hill House. That's literally just a quarter of her roles. And also, she's 17.
With over 70 credits, Grace is the most prolific child actor ever, with more credits than the biggest child actors like Shirley Temple, and Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen. She's also well-known for her portrayal of younger versions of many Hollywood stars, including Margot Robbie, Brie Larson, Amanda Seyfried, Jennifer Morrison and Candice King. Just watch her performance in Gifted or The Handmaid's Tale and you'll understand how exceptional she is. Pamzeis (talk) 13:48, 16 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- Why's the lead image on the left? It doesn't look right IMO
- Well, I put the image on the left so that Grace doesn't look away from the article. I've changed the image and moved it back to the right now.
- "Grace booked her first part in a commercial at five years old"- "booked" makes it sound like she arranged it all herself. She may be exceptional but I doubt she was doing that at the age of five. maybe "Grace secured her first....".....?
- Done
- In the film table, if you sort in date order, "TBA" sorts at the start, before 2013. I would suggest it should sort last, after 2023.
- Done
- In the music video table, you have "herself" as the artist for every entry. Is that not redundant given that it's a list of her performances?
- Removed
- That's all I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:15, 16 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- BTW I am on holiday after tonight, I'll check back when I get back -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:35, 16 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: I believe I've resolved them all your comments. Have a great holiday! Pamzeis (talk) 03:50, 17 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- BTW I am on holiday after tonight, I'll check back when I get back -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:35, 16 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:16, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Pseud 14
[edit]- I think it would be better to have ref 1 placed outside of the enclosure, and not inside.
- Not done per MOS:CITEPUNCT, which recommends that refs be placed inside brackets if it only applies to the material inside (i.e. here it is only citing that she was born in 2006)
- For this part Grace starred in the Ghostbusters (1984) and Ghostbusters II (1989) sequel Ghostbusters: Afterlife (2021)., since she only appeared in the 2021 film, I would suggest maybe saying she starred in the Ghostbusters franchise installment OR sequel film Ghostbusters: Afterlife
- Revised
- For accessibility, per MOS:DTAB Tables need captions- e.g. at the top of each table code put `|+ table_caption_text`. You can hide it from visual browsers like |+ {{sronly|table_caption_text}} as in this example or have it shown as in this example. This allows non-visual screen reader software to jump straight to a named table without having to read out all the text above it to find it. It's already in use under the Extended Plays table, the rest should have the same.
- Done
- That's it from me. Solid work and I enjoyed her stint in Young Sheldon. Pseud 14 (talk) 20:38, 19 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for your comments, Pseud 14! I have hopefully addressed them all. Let me know if I should make any further changes! Pamzeis (talk) 05:49, 20 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. Pseud 14 (talk) 12:45, 20 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Media review — pass
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Source review — pass
[edit]- It might be better to have ref 1 outside of the closing bracket here: "(born 2006[1])", as it currently looks a bit odd.
- Well, MOS:CITEPUNCT recommends putting the ref inside the bracket if it's only citing material inside
- WP:RSPSS seems to regard BuzzFeed's quality as "highly inconsistent", a better source would be needed for the claim made here.
- Removed claim
- Insider is questionable according to RSPSS as well. Any possible alternatives?
- Replaced
- BroadwayWorld is an unreliable source
- Apologies for asking, but why? Because the site seems to accept corrections and have an editorial team. It's also been cited by NPR, Observer, TV Guide, CNN and Time. LATimes called it "an indispensable resource" per its second AfD.
- WP:RSPSS has it in light red, indicating that it is deemed "generally unreliable". This discussion also gave me some pause. Since it regurgitates press release material, it might be fine on a regular article but probably not featured content.--NØ 15:13, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Understood. Removed all instances of the source. Pamzeis (talk) 03:15, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- WP:RSPSS has it in light red, indicating that it is deemed "generally unreliable". This discussion also gave me some pause. Since it regurgitates press release material, it might be fine on a regular article but probably not featured content.--NØ 15:13, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Apologies for asking, but why? Because the site seems to accept corrections and have an editorial team. It's also been cited by NPR, Observer, TV Guide, CNN and Time. LATimes called it "an indispensable resource" per its second AfD.
- Is The Cinemaholic reliable?
- The site claims to perform extensive fact-checking and "do not accept unsolicited guest articles, blogs, or posts". It's also been cited by Women's Health, SCMP and Elle, among others.
- Bloody Disgusting is not italicized on its article.
- Adjusted
- I'm not sure about J-14 as this seems to be a gossip magazine. Couldn't the music video just be sourced to its YouTube upload?
- I'm mean, yes, but I've tried to use secondary sources where possible. I found instances of J-14 being cited by Teen Vogue and NYDN, but I can remove it if needed.
- Spotchecks passed.
- Other than that, the list is reliably sourced with a consistent format. Great work!--NØ 08:25, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for your comments! I've responded to them above. Pamzeis (talk) 14:54, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- The replacements and explanations all look good to me. Passing the source review. Good luck with the nomination!--NØ 05:57, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- MyCatIsAChonk
Support- it seems the other reviewers have gotten everything, very nice article! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 12:12, 5 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 01:08, 7 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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