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The list was promoted by SchroCat via FACBot (talk) 00:30, 15 July 2016 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Latin Grammy Lifetime Achievement Award

Nominator(s): Erick (talk) 23:07, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

After my failed attempt at making this FLC, I took Mattximus and Bencherlite's advice and added as much pictures I could find for the artists who have received the Latin Grammy Lifetime Achievement Award. I also took Bencherlite's advice by adding the births and deaths of the artists and their occupations that are listed on the Latin Grammy website (however they do not show the occupations for the 2014 and 2015 recipients). Another Believer has been a great help and provided useful feedback. I am basing this list on the Latin Recording Academy Person of the Year which was made FL by Another Believer and Jaespinoza. I appreciate any feedback! Erick (talk) 23:07, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Review by FrB.TG

"José José and Roberto Carlos were later honored" - I don't think you need to use full names, especially when their full names are in the preceding sentence.
"Mexican singer-songwriter Armando Manzanero and American singer Linda Ronstadt..." - add respectively to the end of this sentence.
I think para#3 should be para#2.
Consider using {{Abbr}} for Ref in the table.
Why are occupations from Willy Chirino to the end are empty?
"The artists's occupation(s) are listed" → The artists'
Ref 7 - BBC News (BBC) → BBC News, per {{cite web}} and {{cite news}}: "Do not use the publisher parameter for the name of a work (e.g. a book, encyclopedia, newspaper, magazine, journal, website). Not normally used for periodicals. Corporate designations such as "Ltd", "Inc" or "GmbH" are not usually included. Omit where the publisher's name is substantially the same as the name of the work".
Ref 8- who is the publisher of The Portugal News?
Ref 9 - who is the publisher of Variety?
Ref 17 - ditto.

Consider optionally reviewing a nomination of mine if you like the review. FrB.TG (talk) 20:28, 16 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @FrB.TG: and thank you for your comments. I believe I have addressed everything you brought up aside from finding the publisher for the Portugal News, which appears to be a self-published newspaper judging by its website. Erick (talk) 18:05, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support FrB.TG (talk) 07:48, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by AJona1992

Resolved comments from – jona ✉ 16:45, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

* Shouldn't the awarded for column in the infobox and the one in the lead be in quotes since it is a direct quote from the website?

Fixed

You should replace 'award' to 'honor' in the first sentence in the lead so it's less repetitive.

Fixed

Since Joe Arroyo is the only posthumous recipient of the award, it should be noted.

Fixed.

If the awards are honored to musicians who have made a significance to the field of Latin music, shouldn't their active years in music be included or be replaced to the singers' birth years; since you only add the year?

Not really, see the Latin Recording Academy Person of the Year.

Best – jona ✉ 13:32, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for you comments @AJona1992:. My replies are addressed above. Erick (talk) 16:09, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for resvoling those issues, I can now support this article. Best – jona ✉ 16:45, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support Very comprehensive and detailed list. Issues from previous attempted FLC have been addressed as well as those expressed above. Great Job! Diva Knockouts 03:17, 21 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:07, 23 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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