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Buangkok MRT station

Nominator(s): ZKang123 (talk) 04:07, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This is my second nomination of the article, about an MRT station which remained closed even when the line opened. After some lobbying by residents, MPs and grassroots leaders to open the station, including a rare form of public protest by putting up "white elephant" cardboard cutouts, the station was eventually opened. Previously there were concerns raised about the wording and phrases of certain portions of the article, and I had put it up to the GOCE for a copyedit. As the semester ends, I also have more time to work on any potential issues that might arises during the FAC review process. ZKang123 (talk) 04:07, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

750h

Will review. Feel free to refuse my suggestions with justification

lead

Sengkang Central with Compassvale Bow, and serves remove the comma
commercial-and-residential development. ==> "commercial and residential development.", unless there's a reason the hyphens are there
In August 2005, during a visit by youth minister Vivian Balakrishnan visit to Punggol South ==> "In August 2005, during a visit by youth minister Vivian Balakrishnan to Punggol South"
After the Land Transport Authority re-evaluated its feasibility, Buangkok station opened

history

stations announced the communications minister ==> "stations announced by the communications minister"
Lee said at the ceremony Buangkok station ==> "Lee said at the ceremony that Buangkok station"
announcement of transport-fare rises. hyphen is unrequired
Tee-shirts bearing the words hyphen isn't required
No-one, including the girls ==> "No one, including the girls"

details

which has the station code of NE15 remove "of"
two entrances that serving the surrounding HDB flat ==> "two entrances that serve the surrounding HDB flat" or "two entrances that serve as the surrounding HDB flat"
accommodate at least 7,500 people, and to withstand remove the comma
Through the colorful embellishments, Leow intended "colorful" ==> "colourful" in Singaporean English

Thanks for the article @ZKang123:. I have an active candidacy if you'd like to take a look. Best, 750 h+ 15:13, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]