Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Amphetamine/archive5
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was promoted by Graham Beards via FACBot (talk) 12:34, 14 January 2015 (UTC) [1].[reply]
- Nominator(s): Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) & Boghog (talk) 00:25, 6 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I'd be surprised if anyone doesn't know what this article is about, based from the name alone, so I'll forego a description. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 00:25, 6 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from AmericanLemming
[edit]@AmericanLemming: I'm renominating this now, though I assume you'll be busy until later in the month, so no worries. I've made this section for you in advance. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 00:25, 6 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I quickly went through the Interactions subsection to give you some new comments to work with, but I need a few days to reread the first half of the article, both to refamiliarize myself with the material and tweak the prose further if need be. I also need to look at the "Overdose" section again and take a look at the changes you've made in response to my comments. Reviewing this is priority number one for my Christmas break, so I should be able to finish it before classes start up again. AmericanLemming (talk) 08:11, 15 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
American Lemming's comments from peer review/4th FAC
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Lead Just finished reading through this part. It looks well-written, well-organized, and well-sourced. The first paragraph is a bit on the long side, as is the lead as a whole, but I'm not really sure you can cut anything out without losing something important. My four comments/questions are as follows:
I've made two edits to the lead, and I think that will do. The lead is meant to be the most accessible part of the article, and it really isn't the place to be explaining nuances and technicalities. Medical
Sorry for the late follow-up; I've been pretty busy this past week. Contraindications
Side effects
Overdose Update: I've finished going through the prose of the Overdose section, though I do plan to go through it again, as it's hard to catch everything the first time around. One general note: I have some issues with the organization of the section, particularly with the beginning and ending and with the subheadings. See the suggestions below. I would like to log in every day and keep an eye on developments here, but in reality we're probably looking at middle to end of next week or possible next weekend; I'm kind of busy through Wednesday. AmericanLemming (talk) 09:09, 14 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]
And now for the prose comments for the rest of the section:
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Seppi wanted an "edit source" button here
[edit]Resolved comments from this FAC
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Lead through Side effects Reading through these first few sections again I made a few tweaks to the prose, but I have a lot fewer comments than I did the first time around. Rather than 30-40 I've only got five. AmericanLemming (talk) 03:37, 23 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
That is, are “illegal drug use” and “recreational drug use” usually but not always synonymous?
Overdose I just finished going through all of my old comments from this section and looking at your changes and responses. I'm now satisfied with the organization and comprehensiveness of the section, but the prose still needs some tweaking, some of which I can take care of and some of which I'll need to ask you about. I really like the table, by the way; it does a much better job of presenting the same information. Also, I think you should reread the section to make sure I haven't oversimplified anything in my relentless quest to make the article accessible to the general public. AmericanLemming (talk) 08:41, 25 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Interactions
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@FAC coordinators: I support promotion of this article on the basis of its prose, comprehensiveness, and intelligibility to the non-expert (that is, people like me). I've only copy-edited the lead and the Uses, Contraindications, Side effects, Overdose, and Interactions sections, but considering I've spent 40-60 hours doing so, the prose in those sections is now flawless and highly intelligible to the general reader. I've spent a lot of time mulling over awkward wordings that aren't necessarily grammatically incorrect and that take a long time to come up with a better way to say them. I've also spent a lot of time familiarizing myself with rather technical medical/biochemical information in order to be able to say things in a clearer and more accessible manner.
At the end of the day, 40-60 hours is a long time to spend on someone else's article, and given that Seppi hasn't edited this page since 14 December and my first comment was on 15 December, he has yet to respond to a single comment I've made the past three weeks. I'm sure he has his reasons: work, school, family obligations, sickness/personal issues, or simply exasperation with the often frustrating process that is FAC. Anyway, I took a look at the peer review, GA review, and all five FA nominations and came to the conclusion that this article was fairly close to FA status by the end of the second FAC (and possibly earlier.) Essentially it failed because Shudde opposed promotion, and Shudde essentially opposed promotion on the basis of prose (and layout, but he was going against WP:MED guidelines on that).
I have significantly improved the prose in the sections the average person is going to read (the average Joe isn't going to care about amphetamine's pharmacology or chemistry). Those two sections are likely of interest only to those who already know a fair amount about medicine/chemistry, so improving the prose for the general reader isn't especially important. My remaining reservations (though "suggestions for further improvement not necessary for FA status" might be a better description) are as follows:
- 1. I would like to see Seppi take a look at the new comments I've made during the fifth and current FAC.
- 2. I would personally like to see the current pharmacodynamics subsection expanded and moved into its own article; I get the sense from reading it that the subject matter is complicated enough that its current treatment here doesn't do it it justice. Also, I believe that the equivalent section in the Adderall article is much more intelligible to the general reader (me) and thus should be transcluded here.
- 3. I would also like to go through the second half of the article with as much care and diligence as I did with the first half, but I'm not going to put any more work into the article until Seppi addresses the comments I've already made (see #1).
That being said, I'm not really sure that the prose in the second half is really in need of that much improvement, especially given its highly technical nature. The prose in the first half is, in my opinion, impeccable and goes above and beyond the requirement for FA status, if such a thing were possible. (Perhaps I feel that way because I've spent so much time on it.) Reading through all the previous FACs I got the impression that the prose was at a pretty good level already. (John, who is incredibly picky about prose, supported promotion on the basis of prose during FAC #2. Who am I to oppose on the basis of prose, now that I've made it even better?)
Other editors have supported on the basis of the article's medical and biochemical/pharmacological accuracy, quality of sourcing, comprehensiveness, etc., during previous FACs. Perhaps one reason why I'm making the argument for promotion is because I've invested so much of my own time into the article and want that work to be recognized with a shiny gold star. Perhaps another is that I want to see Seppi recognized for all the hard work that he's put into the article. Anyway, sorry for the overly long support with reservations post, but I thought it best to let the FAC coordinators understand exactly why I'm supporting, particularly given that said support might not be entirely objective in nature. AmericanLemming (talk) 05:34, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Quick update: Seppi responded to a message I left on his talk page; it appears he was taking an unannounced wikibreak during the holiday season but will start looking at my comments promptly. If he does, there is no need to action this FAC just yet. :) AmericanLemming (talk) 10:51, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- I've been travelling, though I'm back home now. I'll be WikiOgring (RAWR!) the article and a few others shortly. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 22:19, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- I had to temporarily revert to a december 20th revision of the article due to a large problem with the selective transclusions to adderall, dextroamphetamine, and lisdexamfetamine; it wasn't readily apparent to me where the parsing error was in the source, so I decided to manually restore the edits since the 20th. So far, I've reduced the differences between the past and current revision to this point: special:diff/640446238/640869098 (the improved diff gadget - Special:Preferences, "wikiEdDiff" in the gadgets tab - helps a lot in highlighting where there are substantive difference between these revisions). I figured I should mention here that I intend to add the remaining text revisions back into the article by tomorrow morning - I don't want you to think that I'm just massively reverting all the work you put into the article. I'll start addressing these FAC comments once I've restored the edits you made over the past 2 weeks. Sorry for the delay!
Also, I added 2 new reviews to the biomolecular mechanisms section and tweaked the explanation on the necessary/sufficient relationship (I put it in a note) while restoring these edits; feel free to revise the text I added if you feel it can be improved! Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 00:04, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- I had to temporarily revert to a december 20th revision of the article due to a large problem with the selective transclusions to adderall, dextroamphetamine, and lisdexamfetamine; it wasn't readily apparent to me where the parsing error was in the source, so I decided to manually restore the edits since the 20th. So far, I've reduced the differences between the past and current revision to this point: special:diff/640446238/640869098 (the improved diff gadget - Special:Preferences, "wikiEdDiff" in the gadgets tab - helps a lot in highlighting where there are substantive difference between these revisions). I figured I should mention here that I intend to add the remaining text revisions back into the article by tomorrow morning - I don't want you to think that I'm just massively reverting all the work you put into the article. I'll start addressing these FAC comments once I've restored the edits you made over the past 2 weeks. Sorry for the delay!
- I've been travelling, though I'm back home now. I'll be WikiOgring (RAWR!) the article and a few others shortly. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 22:19, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- It's more or less back to how it was (diff of original vs restored versions) - I made a few tweaks for accuracy in some places and expanded the mechanism section while I was going through the page. The transclusion issues are sort of my fault since I made the source code of the page so complicated; I noticed there were 3 transclusion syntax errors in different sections, which is why I had trouble finding the problem. In any event, if I missed restoring an edit or there's any other issues you see in the article, feel free to fix them! You might want to reread the main overdose section and the mechanism subsection again since I added new content and revised some existing content while restoring the page. I added a collapsed version of {{Addiction glossary}} above the diagram as well to help with accessibility in the addiction section. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 10:38, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@AmericanLemming: Forgot to ping you when I finished the edits/replies. Btw, do you think I should put in the collapsed addiction-related plasticity table at the bottom of the addiction section? I figure it might add some context for the statement about exercise therapy for amph addiction and amph-sex addiction interactions.
Also, Thank you for spending a huge amount of time working on this article with me. I really appreciate your help and hard work on it! Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 02:10, 8 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Five more comments
I've looked over both your responses to my comments and all the changes you've made, and I've made a few more tweaks of my own. I've also come up with five more comments from the Lead through the Overdose section. After these are all taken care of we'll just have three sections left in the article to look over.
- Lead: “amphetamine” versus “amphetamines”: I know there’s the note and all, but I think we should avoid using the term “amphetamines” because it’s potentially ambiguous. Whenever I see the term I’m never quite sure whether it means “amphetamine” or “substituted amphetamines”. There’s three instances in the “Medical” subsection and one at the very end on the “Contraindications” section.
- I'll remove these and use the singular. Edit: I thought that using the singular term would be slightly odd in those places since racemic amphetamine isn't a pharmaceutical - though I think using "amphetamine pharmaceuticals" instead clarifies the point, especially considering that we have a section which covers the types of these pharmaceuticals. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained)
- Side effects/Overdose: Sorry about the Cardiac dysrhythmia/tachycardia mix-up; I’m not quite sure what happened there. By the way, does that mean that the Overdose symptoms table should read “Increased heart rate” and link to tachycardia instead of reading “Abnormal heart rhythm” and linking to cardiac dysrhythmia as it does now?
- I'll need to double check. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained)
- The current article language/wikilink is slightly generalized, but still consistent with the citations. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained)
- Overdose: “since repeated overdoses continually increase the level of accumbal ΔFosB” Would “gradually” fit better here? Otherwise I think we can drop “continually” because “repeated overdoses continually increase” is kind of wordy and having “continually” there doesn’t really add any new information.
- Gradually would be fine here. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained)
- Overdose: “Once nucleus accumbens ΔFosB is sufficiently overexpressed, it begins to directly influence the severity of addictive behavior (e.g., compulsive drug-seeking).” By “directly influence” you mean “make worse”, right?
- Yes, essentially increased ΔFosB expression exacerbates an addiction.
- Overdose: “Once ΔFosB is sufficiently overexpressed, it induces an addictive state that becomes increasingly more severe with further increases in ΔFosB expression.” Is this a cycle where sufficient ΔFosB overexpression leads to an addictive state, which leads to further ΔFosB expression, which induces an even more addictive state, etc.? AmericanLemming (talk) 12:30, 9 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Yeah, it's a pretty retarded positive feedback loop in the brain... Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained)
Comments from Jfdwolff
[edit]This is a very good article. Balanced in an area where there's information from numerous domains to compare and weigh. Using every way possible to clarify difficult concepts using notes and tooltips etc.
- While almost all sections are supported heavily by secondary sources, I still find a number of primary sources in some sections. I found one of these to be over 20 years old (e.g. Imperato et al 1993). They may not have been reproduced or included in the current paradigm.
- A number of references currently contains a message that the "chapter" parameter is being ignored. Can this be fixed?
I will see if any other concerns arise from reviews by others (as I cannot claim much expertise in the subject matter) but I have a low threshold for support provided the primary sources concern is addressed. JFW | T@lk 22:18, 6 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Don't bother with doing so - I replaced it with a new review. I don't mind cutting primary sources because any that are included are unnecessary for WP:V, so if any others are a concern, let me know. The few primary sources covering medical content in humans are all coupled to WP:MEDRS-quality reviews, as far as I'm aware. I'm quite pedantic about citing anything medical regarding humans with medical reviews or high-quality pharmacology references. In any case, I replaced it with a new medical review covering preclinical evidence (I assume this means "lab animals", so I kept that phrase). That sentence was just meant to provide context to indicate that dopamine and acetylcholine interactions from amphetamine are not unique to humans.
- In the few other cases that I included the primary sources with reviews, I did so because: (1) I found it hard to find the information in the review when re-checking (the review on flavin-containing monooxygenase, where it's in a table instead of the article) or (2) I thought the material was important, but not widely covered in reviews in a relevent context or relevant databases (e.g., the dopamine beta-hydroxylase references). Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 23:53, 6 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Edit: Forgot to note, I'm discussing the citation error issue on the CS1 module talkpage. Will probably have them fixed by tomorrow. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 00:35, 7 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- @Jfdwolff: Everything should be fixed now; let me know if anything is still amiss. Citation errors were really just an error in the module script. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 03:51, 8 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Seppi333 Thanks, happy to support for FA. JFW | T@lk 07:32, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Axl
[edit]This is a point that I made at previous FACs: From "Uses", subsection "Medical", paragraph 4: "A Cochrane Collaboration review on the treatment of ADHD in children with tic disorders indicated that stimulants in general do not make tics worse, but high doses of dextroamphetamine in such people should be avoided." Should high doses be avoided in children with tic disorders more so than in children without tic disorders? Axl ¤ [Talk] 10:51, 8 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorry, I hadn't realized my previous comment didn't address your concern - I reworded the sentence to how I interpreted what Cochrane was essentially saying: "A Cochrane Collaboration review on the treatment of ADHD in children with tic disorders indicated that stimulants in general do not make tics worse, but high doses of dextroamphetamine could exacerbate tics in such individuals."
If you'd prefer different wording, feel free to edit that line to your liking. I very seldom revert a reviewers changes to an article in the event you're concerned about it. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained)- No, not in "such individuals", in "some" individuals. Stimulants do not exacerbate tics. *SOME* people may have issues, though. Here are the words from the Cochrane review:
- To evaluate evidence for this reported phenomenon we searched for clinical trials of medications for ADHD used specifically in children with tic disorders. The trials indicate that a number of stimulant and non-stimulant medications are safe and effective treatments for ADHD symptoms and do not worsen tics. High dose stimulants may transiently worsen tics in some children, and worsening tics may limit dose increases of stimulants in some children, but in the majority of children both tics and ADHD symptoms improve with use of stimulant medications.
- And, surprise, that is correct :) "Some" is the correct word. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 22:09, 10 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I don't mind how the statement is worded, though I think this is worth noting: Cochrane's samples were entirely upon individuals with ADHD and some form of tic disorder, so they technically can't generalize the population outside that group without it producing biased statistical inference (i.e., the samples are nonrespresentative of individuals with ADHD in general with or without tic disorders). That's why I assumed their analysis was always in context of the sample and consequently worded that sentence with "such"; in any event, I actually agree completely that dopaminergic-related movement side effects are not specific to individuals with tic disorders. Anyone can develop abnormal involuntary movements and hypersensitive locomotor responses using dopaminergic stimulants because, as in the nucleus accumbens, dopamine (and hence DA stims like amphetamine) induces nigrostriatal ΔFosB in response to chronic sufficiently high dosing.([2] - epigenetics/pharmacogenomics of involuntary motor activity from chronic high-dose L-dopa therapy) Nigrostriatal ΔFosB overexpression, coupled with high-dose amphetamine/methamphetamine, would necessarily produce abnormal motor function and dysregulated motor responses (e.g., substituted amphetamine induced stereotypies). This may or may not contribute to tics though, depending upon which neural pathways give rise to tic disorders. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 01:11, 11 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you. The current text is fine. Axl ¤ [Talk] 09:48, 12 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I don't mind how the statement is worded, though I think this is worth noting: Cochrane's samples were entirely upon individuals with ADHD and some form of tic disorder, so they technically can't generalize the population outside that group without it producing biased statistical inference (i.e., the samples are nonrespresentative of individuals with ADHD in general with or without tic disorders). That's why I assumed their analysis was always in context of the sample and consequently worded that sentence with "such"; in any event, I actually agree completely that dopaminergic-related movement side effects are not specific to individuals with tic disorders. Anyone can develop abnormal involuntary movements and hypersensitive locomotor responses using dopaminergic stimulants because, as in the nucleus accumbens, dopamine (and hence DA stims like amphetamine) induces nigrostriatal ΔFosB in response to chronic sufficiently high dosing.([2] - epigenetics/pharmacogenomics of involuntary motor activity from chronic high-dose L-dopa therapy) Nigrostriatal ΔFosB overexpression, coupled with high-dose amphetamine/methamphetamine, would necessarily produce abnormal motor function and dysregulated motor responses (e.g., substituted amphetamine induced stereotypies). This may or may not contribute to tics though, depending upon which neural pathways give rise to tic disorders. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 01:11, 11 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- No, not in "such individuals", in "some" individuals. Stimulants do not exacerbate tics. *SOME* people may have issues, though. Here are the words from the Cochrane review:
- Sorry, I hadn't realized my previous comment didn't address your concern - I reworded the sentence to how I interpreted what Cochrane was essentially saying: "A Cochrane Collaboration review on the treatment of ADHD in children with tic disorders indicated that stimulants in general do not make tics worse, but high doses of dextroamphetamine could exacerbate tics in such individuals."
- From "Contraindications": "It is also contraindicated in people currently experiencing... severe hypertension." The FDA reference states "Moderate to severe hypertension". The Inchem reference just states "hypertension". Axl ¤ [Talk] 11:07, 8 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- That was probably pruned during previous copyediting - I've cut the word "severe" and left it at hypertension. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 13:46, 8 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I am wary of adding "elevated blood pressure" in parentheses after "hypertension". Hypertension is more than simply elevated blood pressure. Also, elevated blood pressure is subsequently noted as a cautionary feature that should be monitored. (This statement is in line with the references.)
- That was probably pruned during previous copyediting - I've cut the word "severe" and left it at hypertension. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 13:46, 8 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I am inclined to delete the "clarification" of the meaning of hypertension from the text. (I note that the subsequent cautionary features such as bipolar disorder, psychosis and Raynaud's phenomenon do not have associated short definitions.) If you insist that a short definition should be included for hypertension, perhaps change it to "persistent blood pressure"? Axl ¤ [Talk] 09:56, 12 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Deleted it; I don't care for the parenthetical clarification - I only added them in cases where they were requested. In this case, it was redundant anyway. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 09:12, 14 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- The clarification seems to have been changed to "high blood pressure". Axl ¤ [Talk] 21:40, 16 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Deleted it; I don't care for the parenthetical clarification - I only added them in cases where they were requested. In this case, it was redundant anyway. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 09:12, 14 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I am inclined to delete the "clarification" of the meaning of hypertension from the text. (I note that the subsequent cautionary features such as bipolar disorder, psychosis and Raynaud's phenomenon do not have associated short definitions.) If you insist that a short definition should be included for hypertension, perhaps change it to "persistent blood pressure"? Axl ¤ [Talk] 09:56, 12 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I deleted every parenthetical descriptor next to hypertension and hypotension in the article. diff. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 10:22, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- @Axl: I forgot to ping you when I updated this. Sorry about that. :p Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 07:03, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
From "Side effects", subsection "Physical", paragraph 1: "Cardiovascular side effects can include irregular heartbeat (usually an increased heart rate)." Not all arrhythmias are irregular. Indeed atrial fibrillation is the only common arrhythmia that is irregular. I am aware that the linked article, "Cardiac dysrhythmia", states that "irregular heartbeat" is a synonym. The statement is inaccurate. The reference seems to be inaccessible at the moment. Axl ¤ [Talk] 10:15, 12 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I tweaked this as such. Let me know if that works. Wasn't sure how you wanted it. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 09:12, 14 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- No! I recommend "cardiac dysrhythmia (abnormal heart rhythm)." Axl ¤ [Talk] 21:45, 16 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I've changed it to "abnormal heart rhythm". I feel somewhat responsible for the inaccurate parenthetical explanations because I'm the one who requested and/or added them. Per Wikipedia:Make technical articles understandable, I've been trying to explain technical terms, here, since the article's unintelligibiilty to the general reader was one of the main reasons it wasn't promoted before. At the same time, we don't want to oversimplify things, either. AmericanLemming (talk) 10:42, 18 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you. Axl ¤ [Talk] 12:11, 19 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I've changed it to "abnormal heart rhythm". I feel somewhat responsible for the inaccurate parenthetical explanations because I'm the one who requested and/or added them. Per Wikipedia:Make technical articles understandable, I've been trying to explain technical terms, here, since the article's unintelligibiilty to the general reader was one of the main reasons it wasn't promoted before. At the same time, we don't want to oversimplify things, either. AmericanLemming (talk) 10:42, 18 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- No! I recommend "cardiac dysrhythmia (abnormal heart rhythm)." Axl ¤ [Talk] 21:45, 16 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I tweaked this as such. Let me know if that works. Wasn't sure how you wanted it. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 09:12, 14 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Abductive
[edit]- I feel that the lead is a bit overlong.
- The lead certainly is too technical, and jumps around between the historical, medical, chemical, abuse, and legal aspects of the topic. I'll break this down by coding each sentence or part of sentence: 1st paragraph; m,hc,c,c,m,ma,la. Second paragraph; h,hm,m,m,m. 3rd; a,am,am,a. 4th; c,ca,m,c. Abductive (reasoning) 04:36, 18 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Er... I'm not really sure what you just said in the second bullet. If there's a particular sentence that you think is too technical or unnecessary, just let me know and we can address it. Seppi333 (Insert 2¢ | Maintained) 10:00, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Graham Beards (talk) 12:34, 14 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.