User talk:Yalon300/sandbox

Good start to the article, Zestryn, Things to keep in mind going forward: -Introduction: you should provide an introduction explaining to readers what you mean by Nagos. You might think about retitling your article "Nagos People," as well? -Building historical specificity. Right now, the article is pretty broad and overview-y. There isn't much specific information right now, so you will want to provide more details, using your secondary scholarly sources to do so. What else do we know about the Nagos experience in Brazil? Is there evidence of them having a different/specific experience because of their status as latecomers to Brazil? Did they play any particular role in Brazilian society or events that has been described by historians? -Sub-sections: The subheading "Nagos-Brazilian" is a bit confusing. Maybe "Nagos experiences in Brazil?" or Nagos in the Brazilian Slave Trade? -Structure and formatting: it should look like a real wikipedia article with subheadings, table of contents etc. -Hyperlinks: how does your article link out to other articles about Afro-Brazil. Remember, you don't want to duplicate. Again, don't forget all of this must be supported by scholarly sources.Cz17 (talk) 20:49, 4 November 2017 (UTC)