User talk:XueZhao Ma/sandbox

The information you added fits well with the article, and helps explain a bit more what lorinser is to your readers. The first sentence of the history section is a bit confusing, and be careful to avoid sounding biased when you say "excellent reputation". I really like that you added car models to their products section, I suggest add links to individual wikipedia pages for the cars if they have it, and maybe separating the car models from the other products, while still remaining in the "Products" section of the page. You could probably use a sub-header for that. Lastly I would suggest using citation for the information you added, whether it's reusing ones already on the page, or ones you've found yourself. It's looking really good!! Smblake3024 (talk) 06:25, 21 November 2019 (UTC)