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Your submission at Articles for creation: Sheikh Ahmed Babal-Waiz (April 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 333-blue was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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333 -blue 04:03, 5 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! WataniyaProject, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! 333 -blue 04:03, 5 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sheikh Ahmed Babal-Waiz (April 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 333-blue was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Sheikh Ahmed Babal-Waiz and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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333 -blue 04:04, 5 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sheikh Ahmed Babal-Waiz (April 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 333-blue was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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333 -blue 23:06, 5 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Sheikh Ahmed Babal-Waiz has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Sheikh Ahmed Babal-Waiz. Thanks! 333 -blue 09:18, 6 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sheikh Ahmed Babal-Waiz (April 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Wiae was:

This draft will need cleanup to meet Wikipedia's standards. I will try to give a quick rundown of the issues with the draft:

It's not at all clear where this information is coming from. Near the end I see a section called "Sheikh Ahmad Babal-Waiz Biography Written by others". Are these the sources you have used to write the content about Babal-Waiz? If so, this must be made very clear in the draft. You can do this by using references as explained on this page. (There's also a video introducing references on Wikipedia if you would prefer to learn that way.) If those biographies aren't the sources you've used to write the content here, then you must explain what the sources are.
Once you have listed the references that have been used for the content of this draft, please use inline citations after substantive claims about Babal-Waiz so that reviewers and future readers can verify the claims that are made.
A lot of the content will need to be rephrased for style and tone. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and its content must take an objective, neutral point of view of its subjects. Avoid any subjective value judgments or statements that look like opinions about Babal-Waiz. Content like "blessed with an exceptional charisma", for example, is not neutral in tone and should be rephrased. Now, if a source has said that Babal-Waiz was charismatic, then you can write "Source X wrote that Babal-Waiz was a charismatic individual". But otherwise, that kind of content should not appear in the draft.
Wikipedia has a house style relating to Islamic topics. We generally avoid using "PBUH", "SWT", "alhamdulilah", " May Allah have mercy on all of them", "ameen" and the like. (The explanation of this policy is here.) Also, Wikipedia's policy is that it is preferable to write "Muhammed" instead of "the Prophet". I realize that this may be a bit different than in Islamic writings, but on Wikipedia, all articles should be written in Wikipedia's house style. I've already removed the instances of "PBUH" for you.
The first paragraph should briefly, neutrally and dispassionately explain who Babal-Waiz is, his date of birth and death, and what he is best known for. You can learn about how to write a good lead paragraph here.

This should be a start for you. The most important thing is to find and add good-quality references that discuss Babal-Waiz in significant detail. Thanks,

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/wiae /tlk 23:17, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sheikh Ahmed Babal-Waiz (May 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 14:08, 10 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sheikh Ahmed Babal-Waiz (May 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The article must be built from information found in third-party sources (newspapers, magazines) that are independent of the subject of the article. Those sources must be referenced in-line with the text they support. No un-referenced material is allowed.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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LaMona (talk) 08:05, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sheikh Ahmed Babal-Waiz (August 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

This submission appears to be taken from http://haqqnuru.blogspot.com/2016/06/biography-of-sheikh-ahmed-babal-waiz.html. Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly exists under a compatible licence and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

Draft:Sheikh Ahmed Babal-Waiz may be deleted at any time unless the copied text is removed. Copyrighted work cannot be allowed to remain on Wikipedia.
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Daniel kenneth (talk) 15:40, 2 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]