User talk:Tulpenfeld

Your submission at Articles for creation: Neoperl (January 14)

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Stellany (talk) 22:04, 14 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Tulpenfeld,

There are several reasons why your article reads like an advertisement: first, it makes claims that are not sourced or verifiable and secondly, you are using wording that is not objective and does not represent a neutral point of view. For instance, there is nothing to support statements like "unusually advanced for the time" and according to what source was "a great many innovations...developed there..."? When these types of words are used in a biography they are considered peacock terms. And you are essentially promoting this company when you use words such as "wide range of plumbing products", "a great many innovations...", which is also too vague. And the last paragraph reads like a brochure for the product and the last sentence is not technically detailed and is too vague. To get an idea of how your page should read, check out these wiki pages: Moen_(company), Craftsman_(tools). Another tip is to write the page as if you knew nothing about the company and the only information you had is what you got from research on the web or in books.

Hope this helps, Stellany (talk) 00:55, 21 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Neoperl Group

Hello Tulpenfeld. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Neoperl Group".

The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 13:15, 15 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Neoperl

Hello Tulpenfeld. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Neoperl".

The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, copy this code: {{subst:Refund/G13|Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Neoperl}}, paste it in the edit box at this link, click "Save page", and an administrator will in most cases undelete the submission.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 10:29, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Neoperl Group (September 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DGG ( talk ) 23:14, 26 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Neoperl Group

Hello, Tulpenfeld. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Neoperl Group".

The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by one of two methods (don't do both): 1) follow the instructions at WP:REFUND/G13, or 2) copy this code: {{subst:Refund/G13|Draft:Neoperl Group}}, paste it in the edit box at this link, and click "Save page". An administrator will in most cases undelete the submission.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 11:58, 29 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Neoperl Group (February 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Anarchyte was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Anarchyte (work | talk) 09:19, 17 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Tulpenfeld, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Anarchyte (work | talk) 09:19, 17 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Neoperl Group (March 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Neoperl Group and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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LaMona (talk) 01:17, 4 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Neoperl Group

Hello, Tulpenfeld. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Neoperl Group".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 19:02, 2 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]