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The following about questions about Skate Parks is for this course.

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  1. "Out of the 9 public skate parks located in El Paso, only 9 of them had a high quality concrete facility." This seems like 100% were OK. One of the "9"'s must not be right.
  2. [2] note is the middle of nowhere. Needs to be at the end of first sentence if that is what it is providing the source for.
  3. EPSA [Skate Parks Association [http://elpasoskatepark.org/index.htm Skate Parks Association]]. Retrieved February 5, 2014. Missing or empty |title= (help). The title is missing. Delete and use the cite web template or repair this existing citation.
  4. [Skate Parks Association [http://elpasoskatepark.org/index.htm Skate Parks Association]]. Retrieved February 5, 2014. Missing or empty |title= (help)The title is missing. Delete and use the cite web template or repair this existing citation.

--Joe (talk) 16:41, 10 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

About you edition to Skate parks

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You have done a great job in editing information to that section, my only suggestion is to add more information in the section about the locations, adding operation hours, what the limitation are, and what are the restrictions to the use of this public places. --Xaleman87 (talk) 04:56, 20 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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