User talk:Singapaw123!

November 2022

Your edit to Singapore Discovery Centre has been removed in whole or in part, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted material, including text or images from print publications or from other websites, without an appropriate and verifiable license. All such contributions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images—you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously, and persistent violators of our copyright policy will be blocked from editing. See Wikipedia:Copying text from other sources for more information. Hi, the updated version is still very similar to SDC's website. Please write using your own words based on your understanding etc instead of copying from the website itself. Justanothersgwikieditor (talk) 07:08, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, the similarity report is mostly based on the exhibitions titles and Singapore's minister's name. Is there any way I can go around this? Asking because I am an employee of Singapore Discovery Centre and would like to have the wiki page updated. Singapaw123! (talk) 07:18, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. Yes, I am aware of that. You have to look on both sides of the comparison report, the left side was highlighted in red for consecutive sentences. While exhibits etc are hard to rephrase in your own words, you can change the sentence structure etc

The Upper Gallery of the Permanent Exhibits Gallery titled Through the Lens of Time was launched to the members of public in November 2020 to embark on an immersive journey through 700 years of Singapore history with augmented reality technology. Featuring digital interactives, citizen stories, the Lower Gallery titled Sandbox was launched on 20 November 2021. where visitors are encouraged to explore the contemporary aspects of present-day Singapore and imagine the nation’s future collectively.

can be reworded to

In November 2020, SDC launched a new exhibition, Through the Lens of Time, at the Upper Gallery of the Permanent Exhibits Gallery. The exhibition used augmented reality technology to allow visitors travel though Singapore's 700 years of history. On 20 November 2021, an exhibition, Sandbox, was launched at the Lower Gallery where visitors can explore the contemporary aspects of present-day Singapore and imagine the future for Singapore.

This will probably cause a highlight on certain words of the sentence and not phrases etc.

Also, as a staff of SDC, you have a WP:Conflict of Interest and please do not edit the article directly. You should edit using WP:Edit requests to do that. I will put in a template below this section so more information will be provided.

Is this a personal endeavour of yours or have you been instructed by your management to do it? If you have been instructed by your management, please read through Wikipedia's policy on COI and kindly inform/ask them to stop doing it. Thanks. Justanothersgwikieditor (talk) 07:41, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. Thank you for your help. I've submitted a request with the proposed changes. Would greatly appreciate if Wiki could help to review the request asap.

Thank you! Singapaw123! (talk) 08:47, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Managing a conflict of interest

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Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Justanothersgwikieditor (talk) 07:41, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]