User talk:Sarah13BM

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Draft:Banque des Mascareignes

This is an automated message from CorenSearchBot. I have performed a web search with the contents of Draft:Banque des Mascareignes, and it appears to include material copied directly from http://www.mba.mu/members/mascareignes.php.

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The opening sentences are an almost exact copy of the text at [this site]

While I do not see the last three paragraphs at that site, the paragraphs which start with the following language:

With continuous focus on dedicated and personalised relationship management, Banque des Mascareignes’ products and services are designed to meet customers’ needs.

is pure marketing speech and not encyclopedic as written. It is not a simple task to rewrite those thoughts in neutral language.

If I removed the sentences which are copied from another site, and remove the statements that are pure marketing language, there is virtually nothing left. Best to let a neutral editor start over, so I have deleted the whole article. I will tag it as a copyright violation although it's really a combination of copyright violation and removal of inappropriate material.--S Philbrick (Talk) 01:18, 11 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (August 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
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Sulfurboy (talk) 06:56, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Sarah13BM, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Sulfurboy (talk) 06:56, 10 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Banque des Mascareignes (September 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dodger67 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Banque des Mascareignes and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 10:40, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Banque des Mascareignes (September 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by My name is not dave was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Banque des Mascareignes and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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^My^name ^isnot^dave (talk/contribs) 21:40, 4 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Banque des Mascareignes concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Banque des Mascareignes, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:31, 5 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Banque des Mascareignes

Hello, Sarah13BM. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Banque des Mascareignes".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 11:46, 10 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]